Falling Home

Feb 06, 2011 18:31

Falling Home. Ten/Rose. Cliche PWP. 1,861 words. Rated P for Pr0n.
A/N: Little editing has been done in an effort to make deadline. Apologies in advance!

"I'm going to push it," she whispers, mouth open and sucking on his shoulder through his shirt, leaving a darkened wet patch she notices with no small pride. He gulps audibly and her eyes snap to ( Read more... )

:thenakedcupcake, challenge 66

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takethewords February 7 2011, 02:54:10 UTC
YOU. WHAT YOU DO WITH WORDS KILLS ME IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE.

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thenakedcupcake February 7 2011, 03:13:17 UTC
YAAAY.

I figured, its porno o'clock somewhere in the world, SO WHY NOT HERE.

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takethewords February 7 2011, 03:23:21 UTC
Like,

In a still moment of clarity, their eyes meet, and the world quiets. The rustling of the scarlet forest calms in reverence, the time traces glittering across the expanse of their bodies hush, and he is a man before a map of a world he has never seen.

He explores.

HOW DO YOU DO THAT?

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thenakedcupcake February 7 2011, 03:44:08 UTC
There's a beautiful cave between her legs where her skirt beckons with its tempting darkness. She tries to keep her knees together but every time his hands slowly run up the length of her calf she sighs and parts them, just slightly, just enough to make him that much harder ( ... )

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jessalrynn February 7 2011, 02:57:47 UTC
I am sitting here, I want you to know, with my mouth hanging open. If I ever get it closed, I shall probably yell something like "Look at this fucking gorgeous thing she's written!!!"

You literally snatched my breath. It's so pretty and hot, poetic and sensual and breathless... Wow... just wow.

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thenakedcupcake February 7 2011, 03:16:17 UTC
Oh god a jaw drop?! THANK YOU. There hasn't been enough shagging lately, has there? THIS IS A HINT ABOUT MY EXCITEMENT FOR 4 AND 5 OF PERSONAL PRONOUNS BECAUSE YOUR DIRTY TALKING ROSE HAD ME FEELING FLUSHED FOR HOURS OKAY.

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eskridge77 February 7 2011, 03:13:42 UTC
I'm in somewhat precarious health right now. Not sure I should read things like this. No. Not sure at all.

Geez louise...

*goes to read again*

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thenakedcupcake February 7 2011, 03:17:42 UTC
DON'T DIE BB.

Surely, I've got a sedative around here somewhere...

<3

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amberfocus February 7 2011, 03:17:10 UTC
Yes, gorgeous is totally the word that came to my mind, too. You never fail to impress me. My heart is still beating a little too fast after reading this. Just lovely, lovely work.

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thenakedcupcake February 7 2011, 03:22:09 UTC
I'm so glad! I've never done something where the focus is just sex before, it's a little awkward to mash them together with no pretense o_O "You, there, take off your pants!" I'm really happy it worked. =D

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jenrose1 February 7 2011, 03:50:43 UTC
*iz hypnotized by icon*

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amberfocus February 7 2011, 04:36:18 UTC
It's one of redcirce's manips. She does some really great, really sexy manips.

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lovingthecubs February 7 2011, 03:34:35 UTC
JAW DROPPING EPICNESS, RIGHT HERE. WOWZERS.

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thenakedcupcake February 7 2011, 03:46:28 UTC
THANK YOU XD!

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