Forever Begins Here

Jan 06, 2011 19:29

 Forever Begins Here, Ten/Rose. Teen. 2,540 words.
“I know you’ve been protecting me from Satellite Five, but you should know… its okay. I’m alright, and I’ve done… a little bit more than remember,” she says, drawing the word 'little' from her mouth like thin strings of taffy.

She's a witch! )

:thenakedcupcake, challenge 62

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stormandwolf January 7 2011, 06:09:29 UTC
Incredibly lovely. I am very partial to Bad Wolf!Rose (my username is a dead giveaway, I think). The progression of how The Doctor finds out and the way Rose slowly reveals herself is very well done, not rushed at all, even for such a short fic.

My favourite line is this:

“Forever begins here,” says the storm to the wolf, taking her hand and letting the fire in their eyes light the way until the very distant end.

Thanks for sharing this with us! *grins and clapclaps* :)

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thenakedcupcake January 7 2011, 06:39:42 UTC
I'm such a sucker for Bad Wolf!Rose. My muse can't get away from her lately, and that's cool, cause she's such a BAMF. I'm glad it didn't feel rushed! Though sometimes I just want them to fall on each other with zero pretense whatsoever XD

Thank you for the review!!

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stormandwolf January 7 2011, 06:48:33 UTC
I understand completely!

My first work on this fandom is a multi-chapter story which is very Bad Wolf!Rose heavy, I simply adore her. I really would have loved to see the repercussions of the Time Vortex on Rose addressed on the show, somehow, since I really do not believe she is just another human, not anymore. Thankfully, in fanfic, we do not have to worry about actors being replaced or leaving the show, that's the beauty of it.

Can I friend you?

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thenakedcupcake January 7 2011, 06:56:12 UTC
Of course!! I love equally nerdy friends! =D

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develish1 January 7 2011, 06:27:07 UTC
someone beat to pretty much everything I was going to say *looks sideways at stormandwolf* but this really is lovely :)

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thenakedcupcake January 7 2011, 06:40:36 UTC
Thank you!! I'm happy you said it anyway =D

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stormandwolf January 7 2011, 06:53:25 UTC
Hey! I am a complete newbie in this fandom, and as such, I am extremely surprised to be the first one commenting on anything, even less a post on this particular community. *looks as innocent and harmless as possible, waving her "Doctor/Rose Shipper" flag, and pointing to her "I*heart*BW!Rose" button.

*shares TARDIS-shapped cookies*

Peace? :)

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develish1 January 7 2011, 07:11:56 UTC
cookies? *bounces* cookies can get you peace in pretty much any situation I've found, lol.

Actually, I'm pretty surprised I was up early enough to get here when there was just one comment, it's most unlike me, I'm usually at least a day behind.

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tygerwulfe January 7 2011, 07:17:38 UTC

... )

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thenakedcupcake January 7 2011, 07:29:49 UTC
AHHHHHHHHHH I GOT GIFS OMGOMGOMG

*bounces around apartment, scaring cats and making enemies of downstairs neighbors*

Thank you!! XDD

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tygerwulfe January 7 2011, 07:32:35 UTC
*laughs* Then I should probably let you know that it was a 20 minute hunt to find the "THIS!" one that I wanted. :P Specifically. I'll have to remember to gif more often. ;)

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professor_spork January 7 2011, 08:19:52 UTC
Oh, but this is gorgeous. And she's still so human, for a crazy-powerful-goddess-person. My Rose :)

And I'm pretty sure I say this in every single comment to you, but you earn it every single time: your use of language is nothing short of stunning.

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thenakedcupcake January 7 2011, 09:28:27 UTC
Oof, I'm glad the language stayed. When I get more literal and less nebulous/batshit insane I always feel like my vocabulary lessens, and I'm really, really glad it still holds.

Thank you a million, as always <3

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angel_b33 January 7 2011, 14:34:40 UTC
This is lovely! I love the imagery of the Storm and the Wolf going off into the Vortex together, happily ever after! :)

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thenakedcupcake January 7 2011, 23:19:21 UTC
Oh, thank you!! I have been tumbling into fluff lately, which is kind of nice, because I'm used to angst being my default. I'll read something after I've written it and go "Man, I'm an ass." So a happily ever after is nice =D

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