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Dec 31, 2010 16:12

So Much Depends Upon a Red Bicycle, G, nine/rose, eleven/rose
Gift for: nylana  who wanted to know more about that red bicycle

*title borrowed from Williams' Red Wheelbarrow

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:missnyah, -fic exchange 01

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abbigail_cross December 31 2010, 21:24:40 UTC
Loved the reference to Alice in Wonderland in the end. Loved it as a whole. Brill.

-Abbi

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missnyah January 1 2011, 16:11:24 UTC
Thanks very much. I think Eleven would get along very well with Alice.

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rowofstars December 31 2010, 21:43:34 UTC
OH. MY. GOD.

This is everything I didn't know I wanted and more.

The snow is ankle deep and, and far as he's concerned, more properly called sludge. It lies in dark puddles on the street ahead, chunky and thick like the pavement is losing shape under the weight of holiday traffic.

He sighs and watches his breath bleed into the winter wind where it picks up city grit and snowflakes and a stray shopping bag. It carries away a child's voice and the sound of a car engine. It's a wind that's suited to barren moorlands, he thinks, to bleak gothic landscapes.The entire atmosphere in the beginning (which is so very close to how it feels outside right now), and how Nine sees the world as this heavy dreary place, even on Christmas Eve, and after he meets Rose it magically starts to brighten, is just amazing. The way you weaved his changing perception and his post-Time War healing throughout ( ... )

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rowofstars December 31 2010, 21:46:12 UTC
I also have to add that the random Amy and her exasperation with the Doctor, taking Rose and everything all in stride... AWESOME. XD

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dozmuffinxc January 1 2011, 01:19:01 UTC
The red bicycle = LOVE. I adore this concept, and wholeheartedly support Rose going back to make sure that Nine makes it through his post-Time War slump to be the man she knows and loves. Who wants to see it all in the name of those who can't. Absolutely beautiful fic. Thank you for sharing :D

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kilodalton January 2 2011, 05:42:04 UTC
This was wonderful - great job!

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sekichu January 4 2011, 21:36:05 UTC
What.

WHAT.

ROSE BACK IN THE TARDIS? WITH ELEVEN? AND AMY?

Oh look, there goes my heart, tripping over itself in excitement and fanfare. Brilliance everywhere I look in this gorgeous piece. My, have I missed fandom. <3

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I wish I could get my greedy mits on a chaptered eleven/rose fic like this. Mhmnmn, shipper's heart is infatuated with the thought.

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