The Earth That Shifts Where Flowers Grow

Nov 23, 2010 02:07

 The Earth That Shifts Where Flowers Grow, Ten/Rose, completely AU. Adult. 2,380 words.
The glitter wafting from her hair sounds like bells, little tiny tinks beaten out into the air. She shivers and a rush of sparks flies off her, her tawny strands drift skyward. She's in my bed, but floats as if in water. Cries out while I work my fingers into her ( Read more... )

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thenakedcupcake November 24 2010, 00:16:57 UTC
Aw, thank you!! I like wow! =D

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eskridge77 November 23 2010, 12:42:16 UTC
Holy Hannah, that gets the synapses snapping on an earlier-than-usual morning!

Lovely, strange but lovely...

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thenakedcupcake November 24 2010, 00:17:31 UTC
Mmm neural activity.

It is strange, isn't it? I'm so pleased you like it :) I have nooo idea where it came from. o_O

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sapphire_child November 23 2010, 14:12:04 UTC
Weird maybe but very evocative and interesting.

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thenakedcupcake November 24 2010, 00:17:48 UTC
Thank you!!

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missnyah November 23 2010, 14:26:06 UTC
Oh, yes. There's magic in this one.

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thenakedcupcake November 24 2010, 00:18:30 UTC
I'm glad. <3 This makes me grin SO hard.

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professor_spork November 23 2010, 17:44:14 UTC
Gorgeous and evocative. I particularly enjoy the sort of role reversal here-- that SHE is the one who is ancient and forever. And then you include lines like this...

She draws a smiley face in the mud with the rounded toe of her boot. He gives it eyebrows.

Perfection.

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thenakedcupcake November 24 2010, 00:19:47 UTC
I love the role reversal with these two as well... it appears even on non Bad Wolf challenges I still just want to make her all eternal and furry. >.>

Thank you so much for the words <33

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