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Nov 08, 2010 01:23

 a strange edge of air, Ten/Rose, Ten/Hannah. All ages. 904 words. Directly after Doomsday.
Seventy eight point nine percent nitrogen, twenty point nine five percent oxygen. One percent water vapor.

How much of this air is Rose?

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:thenakedcupcake, challenge 56

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thenakedcupcake November 9 2010, 09:16:43 UTC
Thank you! I wanted it to be visceral, I'm glad it worked. =D

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someplacetobe November 8 2010, 14:42:48 UTC
When reading, all I could think was of his desperation, his need and how true it felt.

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thenakedcupcake November 9 2010, 09:17:18 UTC
Yay. Or, poor Doctor. Either way, I'm glad you liked it. :)

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naty_seixas November 8 2010, 14:46:25 UTC
OMG I loved it ♥ I was wishing someone would write a Secret Diary/Doctor Who crossover during Doomsday or even after, like Eleven/Hannah. This is really nice. Wow, I wished you could write more about it ♥

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thenakedcupcake November 9 2010, 09:17:44 UTC
Yaay thank you!! <3

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angel_b33 November 8 2010, 18:12:36 UTC
This is amazing! It made my heart race and Icould really feel the Doctor's breathlessness and desperation. Extraordinarily well done!

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thenakedcupcake November 9 2010, 09:20:03 UTC
I'm glad! Heart racing is exactly what I wanted, and poor Ten, I really wanted his desperation, too. Thank you so much!

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amberfocus November 8 2010, 19:13:25 UTC
The ache of it, how desperate he is to find Rose again and then it not being Rose, but he doesn't care because it's almost close enough. And yeah, of course Hannah/Belle would be attracted despite herself. Great fic.

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thenakedcupcake November 9 2010, 09:22:53 UTC
I really think if he met Hannah/Belle after Doomsday or Journey's End, she would be enough because she had to be. After Doomsday though, I think she would be close enough because he's broken, but after JE I think its because he's hardened and wants a reprieve (well, and broken, and misses her. But JE saps a little of my sympathy. >.>)

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