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Oct 31, 2010 22:51

Held my hand, PG-13, Ten2/Rose
IloveyouIloveyouIloveyou. The words were stumbling from his lips before he could stop them - but it was already too late. Rose had disappeared once again and the Doctor had to pause to slow his breathing and scrub his hands over his face before he could begin analysing the data he had just collected. The human Doctor ( Read more... )

:sapphire_child, challenge 54

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professor_spork October 31 2010, 15:28:42 UTC
Jeez, way to scare me with that warning! I was expecting something WAY sadder and more upsetting than this. ... which is probably very clever of you. You should just do that every time, and then I'll never be upset xD

This was wonderful, though. Well creepy and disturbing, but still with a certain... them-ness. Utterly in-character and just. Awesome.

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sapphire_child November 1 2010, 00:47:42 UTC
LOL. Well I seem to upset you routinely with my angst so I figured I'd cover all my bases just in case XD

Glad you liked it despite the creep factor :)

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arnica October 31 2010, 17:28:56 UTC
Well, if everyone else is gonna be all stoic I'll do it. EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SPACEBUGS THAT KNOCK YOU DOWN AND SUCK YOUR BLOOD EWWWWWWWWWWWW! ::flailingandrolling:: Other than being 100% grossed out by the baddies I loved this a lot. thanks

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sapphire_child November 1 2010, 00:48:26 UTC
LOL. I'm glad somebody was creeped out by them! I sure am :P

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angel_b33 October 31 2010, 19:57:06 UTC
Brilliant!
You've got the tone of everyone just right. And it's so sad! well done.

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sapphire_child November 1 2010, 00:48:43 UTC
Yay! Thank you :)

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thenakedcupcake October 31 2010, 23:02:58 UTC
Rose! Creepy and gross and sad. Perfect for Halloween, and very very well written, but Rose. =(

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sapphire_child November 1 2010, 00:51:08 UTC
I know, I'm mean :( poor Rose.

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develish1 October 31 2010, 23:54:50 UTC
eeeewwwwwww, sorry, got control now, great story, very creepy and perfect for Halloween, but eeeewwwwwwww. sorry, still creeped out

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sapphire_child November 1 2010, 00:52:14 UTC
Lol, fair enough. It is pretty gross :P

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