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Sep 06, 2010 00:23

Paradox 9/Rose 10/Rose 10.5/Rose PG
A/N: -_- I hope this turned out alright. It feels like my brain isn't communicating with my fingers AT ALL.

Oh how he loves... )

:goldencinders, challenge 50

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juliet316 September 6 2010, 07:30:34 UTC
Oh how very very Doctorish and bittersweet.

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goldencinders September 6 2010, 07:33:21 UTC
Thanks :)

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sapphire_child September 6 2010, 09:05:55 UTC
Love this: He was maybe a little more careless than he should have been. That arm’s length rule wasn’t really working for him. The more he pushed the more she pulled. Sometimes by force sometimes with just a tilt of her head. He’d tell her things he’d dare not even think.
And it was fantastic.

And also: Even as he burns up he knows he still loves her and always will. There is no more hurt just more love; for her.
That’s the paradox he supposes.

What a gorgeous use of the prompt! Yay! ^_^ thank you for filling it!

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goldencinders September 7 2010, 04:59:24 UTC
You gave such a beautiful prompt I had to fill it. It really made me step back and think a second about what I wanted to do. Thank! :)

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sapphire_child September 8 2010, 03:08:22 UTC
I'm so glad ^_^

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spellweaver731 September 7 2010, 01:04:04 UTC
Lovely. That arm’s length rule wasn’t really working for him. The more he pushed the more she pulled. I loved that about Nine, that he just could not keep Rose away.

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goldencinders September 7 2010, 04:59:48 UTC
:3 thank you. Never written anything with Nine before, it kind of makes me want to write more.

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shadowed_gold September 7 2010, 05:20:49 UTC
But like all fantastic things it hurt like hell. But of course like all amazingly fantastic things it was worth it.

Beautiful, but so sad--as Ten's dying moments should be.

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goldencinders September 7 2010, 05:47:22 UTC
Poor Ten ;_; Thank you for the comment.

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