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Aug 25, 2010 15:31

A More Ordinary Adventure, Ten/Rose, PG
It didn’t even occur to Rose that the swimming pool would be full of screaming little children when they arrived. Apparently, it hadn’t occurred to the Doctor either, because he looked even more dumbfounded than her. , 650
a/n: Plotless fluff-ish?
“I want to go swimming.” )

challenge 48, :sgmajorshipper

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juliet316 August 25 2010, 20:49:52 UTC
Night swimming, oh they'll have fun!

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sgmajorshipper August 25 2010, 21:02:17 UTC
They will, won't they? I absolutely love swimming at night :D
Thanks for reading! :)

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professor_spork August 25 2010, 21:52:11 UTC
Bawwwwh. This is so completely adorable.

“What are we doing?” the Doctor asked as he adjusted his suit and squirmed a little on the grass next to her. Rose popped an eye open and turned her head, only to find another single brown eye two inches from hers.
“We’re thinking.”
He looked slightly disappointed for a moment, and then replied “Oh! Okay then.” It took about three more seconds for him to ask “What are we thinking about?”
“Things.”
“Oh. Are they interesting things?” he asked hopefully.
“Mhm.”

*wibbles and flails*

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sgmajorshipper August 25 2010, 22:04:02 UTC
Thanks hun! ♥

That bit has grown on me like, a lot since I wrote it. Their cute just kinda makes itself awesome.

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develish1 August 25 2010, 22:06:36 UTC
This is cute, only problem I have is that my mind starts with something as innocent sounding as swimming at night but ends up with something like skinny dipping instead...

don't mind me, I'm comfy in my gutter. Although you're welcome to join me if you wish, there's room.

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sgmajorshipper August 25 2010, 22:17:15 UTC
Heee! *joins you* Well, I must confess, the original ending I planned in my brain was slightly less innocent and involved the Doctor not being able to find a swimsuit...

Sooo...yeah ;D

Thanks for reading!

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sapphire_child August 26 2010, 02:15:35 UTC
Please tell me they went skinny dipping at night in that pool. Pleeeeeease.

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sgmajorshipper August 26 2010, 14:09:28 UTC
Well, like I told develish1, I'd planned out a scene where the Doctor realizes he doesn't have a swimsuit...And I'm sure to make him feel better Rose decides to join him...;D

Thanks for reading! :)

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spellweaver731 August 28 2010, 04:28:34 UTC
I love to swim at night. This was so cute, I loved your Doctor voice :)

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sgmajorshipper August 28 2010, 18:26:06 UTC
Me too! :) Thank you so much...I think the thing I worry most about is making the Doctor sound like he should.

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