Comments | then_theres_us: yay, second fic for this challenge!

sapphire_child in then_theres_us

yay, second fic for this challenge!

Jun 18, 2010 00:07

nightminds, Ten2/Rose, NC-17
In a moment of supreme smugness, Rose prepared herself for what she knew he would do next and was surprised once again when, instead of sliding his palm underneath the fabric, the Doctor continued to push at it until her left breast was completely bared., 8,146
A/N: my apologies in advance for the length :P

( Her training has taught her to always be prepared - no matter what. So when his scream first shatters the stillness of the house like an air raid siren, Rose is out of bed and pulling her bedroom door open before she’s even properly awake. )

:sapphire_child, challenge 38

Comments 22

professor_spork June 17 2010, 16:51:53 UTC

Oh, this is just... absolutely arresting. I have SO MANY THINGS TO DO THIS AFTERNOON, but I was like "oh, I have time to read *something*" and... well, this was worth putting everything else aside. Hot *damn.*

sapphire_child June 17 2010, 23:24:35 UTC

Glad you feel that way! Sorry to have distracted you from rl pursuits but I'm very pleased that you enjoyed this so much :D

nurse_stiney June 17 2010, 18:21:47 UTC

I've gotten so used to Rose/Ten II absolute fluff that I forgot how much AWESOMER it is when there's angst. :P
Beautifully done, and hot without being smutty, and just all-around YESSSSS. :D

sapphire_child June 17 2010, 23:26:23 UTC

Well lucky for you my muse LOVES angst, it's like, her anti-drug :P and Ten2/Rose angst is honestly just too much fun to not write ^_^

Thank you very much! (also I kind of love your icon and keep forgetting to tell you)

applelgrass June 17 2010, 20:24:29 UTC

OMG!It's just so...Have no words.
In some parts I even forgot to breath

sapphire_child June 17 2010, 23:27:43 UTC

Oh gosh - don't forget to breathe! It's kind of important to your health and wellbeing :P

So glad you liked it :)

autumnbound June 17 2010, 22:58:09 UTC

I love this. Your writing is so fluid, and it was just an absolute joy to read. And the angst. Oh the angst.

This was fantastic.

sapphire_child June 17 2010, 23:28:56 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed!

scifishipper June 18 2010, 01:14:15 UTC

This was lovely. I love the slow build-up of their sexual connection - powerful and bittersweet. Very nice!

sapphire_child June 18 2010, 12:22:41 UTC

So often I see smut fics that just leap straight into the sexing. I dunno about everyone else in the world, but in my reality, when you're with a new partner there's usually at least a small build up to the sexing which is what I kinda tried to do here :P hopefully it worked! Thanks for reading :)