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[sapphire_child]

Kimo’s Rules, Ten/Rose, PG-13
For a week after the Olympics they kept getting caught in storms. 3,454 words
A/N: the premise for this fic came from one of Kimo’s Rules and then somehow wound up incorporating all of them somehow :P

Comments

[jandjsalmon]

An utter delight! Your words and imagery were beautiful! Definitely two thumbs up from me. Gorgeous!

[sapphire_child]

Thank you :)

[professor_spork]

Ohhhh, that's my girl. You've written an utterly perfect Rose. Just:

“Right!” she said loudly before bounding up to the console. “Time for me to take you somewhere Mister Lord-of-Time-and-the-known-universe.”

“I never thought rain was beautiful till then. When it rains in London...it’s just like...grey an’...cold. It was different out here. The storm was different.”
The Doctor continued to stare at her, unfathomable woman that she was, until Rose realised and then she looked endearingly self-conscious.
“What?” she asked, brushing a wisp of blonde back from her face.

She smiled then, one of those slow smiles she had that grew until her whole face was just one great big grin.

And I could keep going but I'd just end up throwing back every single line. Just... this is gorgeous. Thank you for this.

[sapphire_child]

You are so welcome. Thank you so much for reading! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it so much :)

[marcasite]

This is beyond amazing. I love the little breaks between each scenario.

There are so many gorgeous lines here, I can't count em all! Beautiful imagery, perfect characterization. Lovely!

[sapphire_child]

Thank you! This honestly turned out better than I thought it would when I started writing it - I hate writing teh pr0nz under pressure! :P

[spellweaver731]

That was lovely. The imagery was perfect...this was just gorgeous.

[sapphire_child]

Thanks!

[sapphire_child]

I love tiny!Rose ^_^

Thank you!