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Set Me On Fire, AU Ten/Rose, (pg-13)
“I’ve no idea what you’re talking about,” he says through a mouthful of cheeseburger. As always, he chews with his mouth wide open-like a toddler. (She finds the most ridiculous things about him sexy. It’s mortifying.) 3,414
A/N The long-awaited (?) sequel to Feeling Electric, which you should definitely read ( Read more... )
“I’ve no idea what you’re talking about,” he says through a mouthful of cheeseburger. As always, he chews with his mouth wide open-like a toddler. (She finds the most ridiculous things about him sexy. It’s mortifying.) 3,414
A/N The long-awaited (?) sequel to Feeling Electric, which you should definitely read ( Read more... )
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I CANNOT WAIT TO READ THIS. Brb with a proper comment.
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This. This is the most perfect thing I have ever read.
I really intended to quote and squee and gush over this UTTER FABULOUSNESS but I don't even know where to begin. I will commission you to write them this way until the end of time. Brb, mortgaging my house to afford you. ♥
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I COMMISSION YOU TO GUSH MORE SPECIFICALLY. AND IN RETURN MAYBE WE CAN WORK SOMETHING OUT.
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I love how you just jump in right where the other story left off and my brain takes this second to catch up like - oh right, woods, tree, kissing! It's like a two part episode of THE CUTEST SHOW EVER. ♥♥
She’d been so deprived before she met this mouth.
GUH.
Just needed to get that out there.
“Yep,” he squeaks when they finally part. “Still got it.”
I love how you do this, this weaving of little bits of the series into the story so that it remains comfortably familiar but able to stand on its own. Plus, adorably dazed Doctor is adorably dazed. ♥
“I thought that Rule One of our friendship is that you’re always wrong, because Batman is infinitely superior to Superman?”
And I thought Rule One was Don't Wander Off. But you know what? THIS WORKS TOO.
“If you say The Doctormobile I am walking out and leaving you here.”
“If you say Bessie 2.0, I’ll walk out and leave you here.”Yay for Classic Who ( ... )
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Like a four year old being given candy (or a unicorn).
And now. Now I am speechless because I love this universe. I love how your AU Doctor&Rose is still OUR Doctor&Rose, how even though they grew up in different worlds/lives, they are still the same essential people that I obsess over far too much. As always, you have utterly flawless dialogue that makes me swoon.
(Also, since I subscribe to the theory that Jack will one day become the Face of Boe, the idea that Jack is watching Doctor&Rose about to make love is so horrifyingly funny. He would probably like it too, the lech.) I cannot tell you how much I adore the references to canon (Astrid and TARDIS and the Doctor's unwillingness to say those three little words).
PS: Shy and stumbling and kind of adorkable Ten is just so devastatingly cute.
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THAT PERVERT.
... I love Jack. <3
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It should be about us-not how impressive you think you are.”
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ILU BB THANK YOU
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I love that this one picked up RIGHT where the other one left off, and it's not like two years later or way in the future or something.
The general idea was that this one would be mostly from Rose's point of view, because FE was predominantly from the Doctor's perspective. I... kind of failed on that front, because apparently FE!Doctor's head is one of my favorite places ever, but I TRIED OKAY.
And I adore how his panicked kisses in worrying if she's all right turns into like a full blown makeout session.
Oh, he's so enthusiastic. Bless him.
And I start to really freaking LOVE YOU for weaving in depth to this. This is SO the Doctor, seeing the fragility of her life and always trying not to think about it think about it think about it. At least, that's how he is in my head, and how I write him. SO YEAH. ILU 4 THIS.
THANK YOU FOR NOTICING. In my opinion, Ten isn't truly Ten unless he's a neurotic ball of worry when it comes to Rose. No matter what universe he's from.
On the one hand yes, and that is ( ... )
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