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[sekichu]

one day soon I'll hold you like the sun holds the moon, eleven/rose, PG-13
( Inspired by The Girl by City & Colour and Letters From The Sky by Civil Twilight. )
The Doctor steals one night, one night between giant cakes and ginger girls; he keeps one night for himself.

A part of her pushes anxiously - she doesn't have the time, doesn't have the luxury

Comments

[galfridian]

This was fantastic! I love the imagery. I'm adapting this fic as my personal canon. :)

[sekichu]

Awww, that is such a compliment !

This is just me coping for an anti-Rose Moffat and
subsequently a Rose-less series five. // angsts

[aeditimi]

me too.

[sekichu]

That is really too kind of you. <3

[madeelly]

Oh, this is so lovely. ♥ The writing is beautiful and the description of each of their POVs is amazing. And that last line broke my heart a little. Fantastic work. =]

[sekichu]

Thank you !

I struggled a bit with it since ... well, Rose doesn't
know, but Eleven knows and Rose kindofsortof knows (or
suspects) but doesn't really!

... I'm confusing myself. ; A ;

[tenpastfour]

You captured their internal angst brilliantly! Well done. :)

[sekichu]

Me and my angst. OTL

This was actually intended to be fluff and romance and sweetness and comfort, but as always I cannot escape angst when I write Eleven.

this won't sound like a compliment at first, but I swear it is.

[mylittlepwny]

Legit the first and probably one of the only Eleven fics that I've actually liked. I'll read it so long as he's paired with Rose, but it takes skill to keep me around and interested, and you, my dear, have done it.

BRAVO.

Re: this won't sound like a compliment at first, but I swear it is.

[sekichu]

No ! That is a HUGE compliment!

My aim is to convince/convert people over to Eleven/Rose, you see (and also I adore the stuff you write so...), thus hearing you say that is just amazing!

I'm really glad this managed to keep you around long enough to enjoy it~ <3

[professor_spork]

Okay, I just---

I may have done it first, but you do it better. You make me ship it. Truly.

"Wrong cake," he says by way of explaining because it is true and because if he never has to tell another lie to Rose Tyler, then the universe is kinder than he gives it credit for.

Oh, my heart. Insta-mem.

[sekichu]

That is just so not true because you are brilliant and amazing and utterly fantastic in so many ways it makes me swoon quite girlishly ( ...will you marry me? * w * )!

Sometimes I think I wrote this entire fic just so I could write that line. I fell in love with the idea of this fic because of that line - since I was tinkering with timelines and then I remembered how when Eleven popped out of Rory's cake, he was all "Oh, for a second I thought I was in the wrong cake again," and my head went all LIGHTBULB!

W-what is a mem ? I'm really new to lj and stuff so forgive my ignoranceeee.

[professor_spork]

<333333

There's an option on posts (near "add comment" and "link" and whatever else) that says "add to memories." When you do that, it saves that post to a page on your journal. It's like a Favorites capability, but lj-exclusive. And don't worry, livejournal has a steep learning curve. It took me ages to figure all of it out.