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[themoononastick]

Title: Control
Fandom/Pairing: Lost - Jack/Sawyer
Rating: R
Warnings: Snark. Rude words. This fic has s/D issues (oh boy does it have issues!)
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters from Lost nor will I make any money from them.
Beta: The spectacularly brutal philomel who, after fixing the punctuation and providing invaluable character tips, ripped it

Comments

[thalassatx]

Dayumn.

*pants heavily* That's good.

[themoononastick]

Thank you, thank you very much.
(hmmm I appear to have turned into Elvis, that can't be good!)

Love your icon btw, hurrah for Princess Bride references!

[ellel]

ahhhhh,damn...the hotness...
*is speechless*

loved it!!!
:)

[themoononastick]

Oooh I made someone speechless. Cool! :)

Glad you loved it and tah v. much for commenting.

[foxxcub]

Oh. MY. *closes mouth*

Goodness, girl. I want to make growling noises at them! Yoowza! ;)

[themoononastick]

Growl away! I'm sure they would enjoy it ;)

I'm really happy that you liked it I was a bit worried that I hadn't quite got it right so kind words from you make me grin (and maybe a bit giddy!) as I know you like this pairing.. Thank you so much for commenting!

(oh and I may have to snag your icon cos... *looks at her fic*..*grins*.. just cos! I shall, of course, credit the maker.)

[foxxcub]

You are welcome to all my J/S icons, I have many to share ;)

[themoononastick]

Woohoo!
*runs off to snag more yummyness*

[philomel]

EEP! I LOVE the way you ended it. Just the right punch of an ending!

Wheee. Sho pwetty. Wherein pwetty = pretty = pretty damn delicious.

Excellent final draft, babe. I love s/D that contains so much grey area-- where sparring upsets any simple, staid notions of traditional role play. So raw. And, mmm, I hope there are more "debts" to pay in the future. :D ¡&hearts!

I'm brutal? But, but. *pouts and goes off into corner to polish halo*

[themoononastick]

wheeee! You liked the ending! I thought it was better leaving it there as it seemed to fit better...

*twirls around giddily* Thank you! It makes me ridiculously happy that you liked it (esp as you had to suffer the first draft but I'll get to that in a minute)*tacklehugs you*

I love s/D that contains so much grey area-- where sparring upsets any simple, staid notions of traditional role play
I think by now you know that I'm not exactly a traditionalist! Seriously tho *nods* I agree. I like to think there is room within the s/D idea to play (ahem!) around with the whole concept a little. It makes it more interesting to write and (hopefully) read.

Future "debts" may have to wait till I've seen more of Lost *glares at UK tv schedule* as I can't keep running to you thusly *tugs on your sleeve* "would Jack do... , would Sawyer...". Maybe tho... tis a long time till August.

*finishes polishing your halo for you and puts it back in place* Don't pout! I meant brutal in a good way! You and I both know it needed some serious brutality, I

[philomel]

I like to think there is room within the s/D idea to play (ahem!) around with the whole concept a little. It makes it more interesting to write and (hopefully) read.

I think so. :) There's probably something about traditional s/D (because it is so traditional) that grates against my inner-feminist (although here it's m/m), because I want there to be a sense of equality. Like in Secretary: you knew Maggie Gyllenhal's (err, I have no idea how to spell that damn name) character had an immense amount of power, despite taking on the submissive role. So it's not quite as it seems. Okay, I'm rambling.

Well, that's fine... 'cause, while you wait for Lost to finally air (or the dvds to arrive), you can write other--perhaps more revolutionary--pairings. ;) But you can run to me as much as you like. (That sounds like a lyric gone awry.) Yes, it is a long time! And those of us in between-season withdrawal need all the fic we can get. *waggles eyebrows*

Hey, there's a crack!fic. Sawyer demonstrates his love for Jack by allowing his head to be

[themoononastick]

And those of us in between-season withdrawal need all the fic we can get

I have informed the muse and she will take it into consideration, there are stirrings on the revolutionary front at the mo, maybe, possibly..*feeds muse more sugar*

Taking the s/D discussion to the (ahem) club-house as I can feel a long ramble coming on.. you have been warned!

ok its official you are more cracked than I, altho....hmmmm

♥

[halfdutch]

Wow, that was very rough J/S, almost a Sawyer/Sayid vibe. Very hot! You and teh pr0n are obviously on good terms!

[themoononastick]

Yeah, I wrote it after only having seen a few episodes of Lost so the Jack/Sawyer dynamic hadn't "mellowed" yet! I am actually kind of tempted to rewrite it as Sawyer/Sayid....

*grins*

Cheers babe!