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[themoononastick]

Title: Metanoia
Pairing: Matthew Fox/Josh Holloway
Rating: Light R? PG-13?
Summary: For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction.
Disclaimer: Not Real.
Warning: Kinda angsty...
Beta: The inspirational and ever patient philomel. <3
Feedback: is my drug of choice.
Notes: Thank you to halfdutch for your invaluable help in the "research" department and to alliecat8

Comments

[misse1977]

Wow. Brilliance and long time no see! Finally some Josh/Matt action! And a great one to. THANKS!

[themoononastick]

Thank you! I'm really happy that you liked it, thanks for reading. :)

[foxxcub]

♥

I love you. So very, very much. No one does Foxshy!kissing like you, dahling.

[themoononastick]

Aw, love you too, hon. :D
Also, yay you liked it! That makes me giddily happy, I hope you had a fabulous birthday and that you have a wonderful year. *kisses*

*is ignoring the Foxshy!kissing comment because* Oh, please... *rolls eyes*

♥

[philomel]

I think I forgot to say earlier how much I like the title. Yay for obscure, interesting words!

He likes the look of black and white, likes the way it bleaches the world - removing the color so that the glare doesn’t seem so intense and he can look at it without having to shade his eyes. He shoots pictures off frame so that the viewer is forced to search for the thing that caught his eye, made him take the shot, because that way every person can see something new in the image.

Your rendering of both of them is truly engaging, hon. Josh's breeziness contrasted with Foxy's reservation and introspection. It's almost an archetypal collision of the thinking side and the feeling side (so, if you squish Josh & Foxy together it makes one whole brain? eep, just kidding!)--only more complicated since we're dealing with people here, where nothing's ever truly black & white. Obviously, you know I love me some Dom, and you portrayed him absolutely perfectly as always. (I do think Evi might have a few choice words for him later. In fact, I wouldn'

[themoononastick]

It's a gorgeous word, "metanoia", isn't it? It's all spiky but smooth at the same time. *nods* (Wot? No, I haven't been at the Dayquil again. Honest.)

Thanks, babe. *hugs* You know how happy it makes me when you like something I write and it goes double for this one. I'm glad that you liked my take on VigorliFoxy'n'Josh (Wot? I didn't say anything? I made no mention of Vigorli at all. heee! Do you think the squishing thing would work with Orli, or would it take more than one other person to give him a whole brain ;P ) it seems that each time I write them I get wordier and less fluffy. Hmmm, next time I'll try using Burroughs' Cut Up technique!
I think it's funny how Foxshy no longer seems to be Foxshy without some kind of Dom based involvement. The little attention whore. (And yes, Evi may have indeed felt the need to resort to punitive measures ;) If only I didn't have issues writing Monalilly these days....)

♥

[invisiblelove]

Mmm, wonderful work :)

"Go get me a beer, woman. Me and Foxy have guy stuff to discuss."
*SNORT* That cracked me up :p

Love the whole 'opposites attract' angle you took. Good job!!

[themoononastick]

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

*grins* Dom is such a gift when it comes to writing silly dialogue!

I'm really happy that the fic worked for you and you liked the angle I took, thanks for reading. :)

[ellel]

*roars*
oh,the kisses...this was most excellent!...and such a perfect timing-I did some retouching to a Foxshy wallpaper today(posted in my LJ),and I was hoping for some new fics:)

[themoononastick]

Thank you! I'm really happy you liked it and that my posting of it came at such a perfect time! Glad to have plugged a gap in the fic market, for a while at least!
Thanks for reading :D