Fic: Jared/Jensen, Jared/Jeff/Jensen for Marti. ♥

Apr 21, 2007 14:17

Title: Snapshots.
Pairing: Jared/Jensen, Jared/Jeff/Jensen.
Rating: From gen to NC-17.
Summary: Brief moments in time.
Disclaimer: Not real.
Beta: zelda_zee
Notes: Birthday ficcage for astra2104 - 10 interconnected drabbles based on word prompts that I asked her for when my brain came up empty on the fic requests she made. It’s not what you originally asked for, ( Read more... )

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zelda_zee April 21 2007, 19:55:25 UTC
I love how each of these is completely independent of each other and yet, taken together, they form a sort of mosaic of a relationship. I like the different moods, ranging from awww sweet to omg hawt. It's hard to choose a favorite, though I am still really fond of that image of Jared watching Jensen fall asleep.

And points for bringing JDM into the mix! ;)

Marti is such a lucky girl!

I'm still kind of blown away by this, by the fact that you wrote ten drabbles that are actually all exactly 100 words.

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themoononastick April 22 2007, 18:27:32 UTC
Thank you so much, hon. I'm so happy you liked them all and I'm really glad you think they work well together as a picture of a relationship - that's what I was hoping for so I'm pleased you think that worked. And thank you again for the beta, you totally saved my oh so English ass. ;)

How could I not! The poor boy was all pouty and sad and feeling left out, I couldn't leave him like that. *g*

Eh, I think I have drabble OCD or something, I can't help myself!

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gottalovev April 21 2007, 22:04:44 UTC
ohhh, how wonderful! I love each and every one of those drabbles! my favorite is probably the one where Jensen need to unwind and tosses the playstation controller away.

and each is 100 words long? I admire dedication like that :D

great gift, I'm sure Marti will love it (I sure did!)

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themoononastick April 22 2007, 18:28:39 UTC
Thanks so much, hon. I'm really happy you liked them. ♥

Yeah, what can I say, I'm anal! ;p

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astra2104 April 21 2007, 23:17:22 UTC
Oh this is just... I'm speechless. And incoherent.

And probably the happiest person on LJ right now.

These are so good, all of them, every single one, all of them together...I forgot my prompts while reading them, because there were just so many bright, clear, intense images my brain was filled with, and just...just guh.

Current favourite lines:
Jensen never really understood addiction until he met Jared.
So true! ;)

They’ve done this 100 times already and Jared’s not bored yet.
Oh man, that sentence slays me!

But huddled together with Jared, a single blanket wrapped around the pair of them, Jensen doesn’t feel cold at all.
Awwwww....awwww, you just know how to push all my buttons, don't you? *loves*

and Jensen watching, his eyes blown to black pools and his gaze so heavy with lust that Jared can feel it raking across his skin.
Guh. I'm dead. All your fault.

Thank you so so so much, my lovely Lynn. You're a star in my sky ;)

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themoononastick April 22 2007, 18:36:30 UTC
*beams*

I am so so so happy you liked them, that makes me grin like an idiot. And see, there was nothing to worry about when I asked you for 10 words! ;p And I did manage to get an awards show in there somewhere as well so I kinda (vaguely) did something with your original request.Anyway, you're welcome, hon, I'm glad I could add a little something to your birthday haul. *mwah*

♥ ♥ ♥

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keyweegirlie April 22 2007, 01:12:21 UTC
Oh wow Lynn...

These are all so wonderful and amazing and each and every one of them could get turned into a longer fic. Just wow...Marti is so lucky to have you as a friend, as are we all.

I'm gonna save this to my memories and come back here often.

*hugs*
~C~

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themoononastick April 22 2007, 18:30:12 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked them. :) If any of them spark an idea for you and you want to run with expanding them then please be my guest and go for it.

*smooch*

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toestastegood April 22 2007, 01:29:59 UTC
Those were all so pretty, I don't think I can even pick out a favourite one. They all seem to flow together so well. You win major points for including JDM! I'm going to go back on my word now and say that my favourite's actually the one from his POV - the visual was so gorgeous (yum!), and I love how confused he seems while also understanding that he's damn lucky and I'm jealous of him. :P

Also? Yay for the 100 words each. I usually get fed up and start growling at the screen when I try that, so some major respect!

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themoononastick April 22 2007, 18:32:26 UTC
Yeah, the JDM one is my favourite too, but then I have a huge thing for Jeff so it would be! I'm glad you liked them, that makes me happy. :)

Oh believe me there was much growling at the screen and also quite a lot of swearing but I seem unable to give up on the idea of exactly 100 words. heh.

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