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[themoononastick]

Title: Curb
Fandom/Pairing: Without A Trace - Danny/Martin
Rating: Light R
Summary: Martin needs to keep control.
Beta: The fabulous lillyjkFeedback: I am a whore for it

Comments

Curb

[melissa61460]

What a great story! I can see Martin wanting to keep that wall, not wanting to let go and Danny working at getting rid of it.

Re: Curb

[themoononastick]

Thanks! *nods* Yeah, that's exactly how I see them. Danny chipping away at Martin's composure on a daily basis.
Glad you liked it - thanks for reading. :)

[lillyjk]

I told you when I betaed this that I thought it was just fabulous. Wonderful characterization of Martin here as being so stoic and trying to keep himself from falling for Danny!

[themoononastick]

Aw thanks hon. And thanks for the beta too. :)
It makes me really happy (and maybe a little proud ;) ) that you liked it as you write such brilliant Danny/Martin fics IMHO. Cheers babe!

[philomel]

As I've barely seen more than a handful of episodes of this show, I know my feedback doesn't hold much weight. But I had to read this. Lovely. Well-written, hon. :)

[themoononastick]

Oh sweetie you should know by now that any feedback from you holds enormous weight for me. And the fact that you liked it without knowing the ideas behind it makes me very happy indeed. *hugs*
Thanks hon. :)

[aesc]

Martin thinks he would like to film the two of them together. Then he could watch later and see how they look. See the contrast of their skin tones, cinnamon on cream.

Mmm. Had a moment, there.

Lovely look at Martin's psyche, and you've captured his need for control (and his denial re: the fact he has none where Danny's concerned) perfectly. Poor Martin... addicted and he doesn't know it. *loves* Beautiful work :)

[themoononastick]

*grins* My work here is done!

And yes, poor Martin, he should just give in!

Seriously tho, thank you so much for your kind words and thanks for reading. :)

[ellie_pierson]

Martin thinks he would like to film the two of them together. Then he could watch later and see how they look. See the contrast of their skin tones, cinnamon on cream. See the way that Danny arches into his every touch; see the way he writhes, and, see him gasp as Martin sinks slowly inside

Yeah I would like to see that also!!

I love your descriptions of an 'in control' Martin. You hit the nail on the head.

[themoononastick]

I have a copy of the tape if you... oh wait, I don't, dammit!!

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading. :)