Yaaaaay, this installment got finished fiiiiinally. Maybe the next ones won't take as long? Let's not hold our breaths.
Title: hold and release
Ficverse: Leverage
Series: Silver and Gold
Rating: Gen, PG
Length: 3600 ish
Characters: Sterling, Maggie
Teaser: Sitting out on the balcony of James Sterling’s LA condo for the fourth day of being stashed
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I mean, I know you were along for the ride and everything, but I'm SO glad you love it.
this chapter that isn't weighed down by all the thinking you had to do,if that makes sense. It reads like it was meant to be all along
Boy howdy! Here's to both of us not having to go through that process again as intensely as that! For myself, I can mostly feel it works, but it'll probably take a while before I can stop seeing all the seams still. But I'm happy to take your word for it. And just glad it's done!
I want her to have to outburst, but I don't want her to have it at him.
Yes, it was exactly what she needed. And as soon as I let her have it, the story started actually taking the shape it needed to. Funny that!
what her actions are doing to him in this chapter
Hehehe, that one moment? Definitely my favourite of this story. The yelling is great too, and I'm so glad you sanctioned indulging in the description, but that moment? Oh, Sterling. Trying so very hard to pretend he hasn't lost, that he didn't lose this game the moment he decided to play, way back then.
I SHALL ENJOY MY BEVERAGE OF SATISFACTION. And you know you'll hear about it the moment I've got anything worth telling :)
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SQUEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
:D
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