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Lament for a Daemon's Soul [Chapter Twelve]

Jan 29, 2011 03:15

Title: Lament for a Daemon’s Soul
Author: Sio
Rating: At least R for violence.
Length: 24998 / ?
Spoilers: This is AU, but Season 1 spoilers are possible starting with chapter 6.
Summary: Rachel is a member of an immortal altered race of humans that call themselves the Vanpyr and live in secret alongside normal humans. Murdered years earlier ( Read more... )

setting: supernatural, fic: lament for a daemon's soul, universe: lament, pairing: rachel/quinn

Comments 10

anonymous January 23 2011, 15:46:37 UTC

OMG I just came across this wonderful story. Just read all 12 chapters.
I already can't wait to read the next part, which I hope will be soon.
Love Love Love this story.

thelastpen January 23 2011, 15:48:31 UTC

Okay, anonymous = super 'net ninja. Straight up.

Glad you're liking it. Depending on how long it takes to get the scene formed and out, C13 should be up by the next day or so at the latest.

motylik January 23 2011, 17:56:15 UTC

Rachel is pissed!!! I can't wait to see how she reacts. Also I can't wait to find out what Sue is. In throwdown, who would win? Sue or Rachel? I loved how Santana and b totally see through Quinn. Hahaha

thelastpen January 23 2011, 18:27:31 UTC

She is so very, very pissed. In fact, I'm already better than a thousand words into how very pissed she is. Things are looking promising for a C13 being up before the end of the day.

Sue is what she is, sorry, not revealing that too early. But in a straight up fight... hmm... Sue's much older with all the experience that entails, but in sheer power, Rachel's stronger... at the moment. What Sue is is an interesting rank in that it's possible - in that there are rumors - it's actually a shoot off of a different rank, one which isn't human at all. But no one knows for sure and the members of that rank sure aren't talking about it. However, if the rumors were true, then Rachel wouldn't be stronger by merit of being one of the Daemon anymore. How's that for confusing? XD ( ... )

winstonta January 25 2011, 05:21:55 UTC

That sound in the distance? That's the sound of shit hitting the fan. Good luck, Puck. I wish you well, my friend, and hope you get to keep both of your balls.

In other news, this continues to rock :D

thelastpen January 25 2011, 05:23:24 UTC

C13 wrote itself very fast, but I'm not entirely positive I properly conveyed the level of anger involved. Hopefully it'll seem real enough. And yes, Puck is in so very much trouble.

Glad you're still enjoying it! :3

sometimescathy January 26 2011, 01:01:59 UTC

I like how in depth you went with Quinn's character. It definitely gave us a peek at what happens in that mind of hers. Nicely done! Now I'm off the next chapters that you've already posted =)

thelastpen January 26 2011, 01:31:10 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it still! I was trying to make Quinn more sympathetic with this chapter. I'm glad it seems to have worked.

silentinformer January 26 2011, 16:49:02 UTC

I really liked the whole clinic scene thing you had going on, I always felt it would have added a lot of emotional depth to the whole baby storyline to see that kind of thing early on it. OOH pissed Rachel is going to be fun lol.

cyberninjasio January 26 2011, 16:51:45 UTC

Never been in her situation myself, so I couldn't show inside or a lot of the details about the test, but I felt I could show the trepidation and anxiety she had to be feeling this way. I don't like how manipulative and bitchy they seemed to try and make Quinn in the first season and I wanted to give her a chance to show what she had to be going through too.

And yes, pissed Rachel is much fun. :3