Possible college essay. Only it's far too long.

[thelag]

When you’re five years old, you don’t think much about the future. All that you really want are hugs, the best swing on the playground, the occasional nap, the toy that your brother or sister is playing with, and a cookie now and then. Life is so simple. Or so we think.

At the age of five, I myself was a typical child. Being the first-born and the

Comments

[twilight_luvers]

Very good! Let me know if you need help shortening it.

[thelag]

It needs to be about a third of that length :( But I'm not quite sure how to do it.

Maybe I will just write another essay.

[lalalauren7]

I do believe I will hire you and Hillary both to write books for me to read when I am rich and famous. What I will be rich and famous for, I have no idea. I like this a lot. It made me smile because it was really well-written, but more because it was written from you. And the entire time I pictured you telling me that story instead of writing it. :)