Comments | theladyfeylene: Orphans of Ishbal - Winry/Scar

theladyfeylene

Orphans of Ishbal - Winry/Scar - PG-13

Aug 22, 2006 14:19

Some ridiculously depressing and angsty fic for snakecharmerfox's birthday. I do apologize for how depressing this is, but the prompt you gave me lended itself to angst and I'm not really in a mood to write anything happy, so.... enjoy. Takes place somewhere around episode 24 and is technically AU ( Read more... )

fic, fma

Comments 6

anat_astarte August 22 2006, 23:09:30 UTC

I LOVE this!!!! Thank you so much!!!!

anat_astarte August 22 2006, 23:20:33 UTC

I'm going to put this comment here too:

Thank you, thank you so much!!!! This is a lovely piece, and Scar and Winry were portrayed beautifully!!! XD

I'm glad that you wrote this using the anime canon. I saw the anime before I read the manga and I prefer the anime version/storyline of Scar. This is not a depressing piece! It is a wonderful story about finding common ground, even for a short time, and relating to each other as human beings :)

I also love that Winry was attracted to Scar. You so know how to make me happy!!! XD

Thanks again!!! Wonderful work!!!

theladyfeylene August 23 2006, 18:35:33 UTC

I'm very glad you enjoyed this. It was a difficult pairing to do, but I've always enjoyed a challenge! And I'm with you on the anime!Scar storyline. I much prefer his story and the story of the homunculi from the anime.

Happy Birthday again!

momoiro_usagi August 24 2006, 15:25:23 UTC

Oooh, that was so good! I can't believe I didn't find this until now! :3 You took a really difficult pairing and made it work, but not only did you make it work, you also made it beautiful and convincing! Great job! :)

Have I already told you how much I love your Winry? You don't write her very often (neither do I, usually), but still you handle her so well! ^^

_acerbitas_ August 29 2006, 01:55:10 UTC

Wow, that was so awesome! I couldn't believe it when I saw the pairing, but I was sure it was going to be good. And it was! I loved the way they connected together, and the way you portrayed their emotions with just a few simple sentences. That's great!

redrose999 August 31 2006, 15:54:10 UTC

Beautiful! Beautiful! That last line, put a lump in my throat! OH Winry and Scar, you really feel for both of them, and I love how they bond at the end!

AMAZING!