Sacred and Profane - Dante/Rose, Dante/Scar, Scar/Rose - R

[theladyfeylene]

So, momoiro_usagi and I were talking about some stuff, and this fic was born of it.

Title: The Sacred and Profane
Author: theladyfeyleneFandom: FMA

Comments

[theladyfeylene]

It's passed my mind, and I'm not overly fond of it, but the idea for this fic wouldn't leave me alone! I have trouble pairing Scar up, since he's so...not-sexual. Sexy, yes, sexual, no.

Thank you!

[momoiro_usagi]

OMG! You wrote it! ^_______^

The descriptions in this story were so alive, and I loved the way you wrote Dante's adoration for Rose's body! So in character, and so very sensual! And RosexScar is absolutely adorable!

You even included the leprosy! ;) ha ha! That's one way of describing it!

Nice, nice job, hun! It was a pleasure to read! ^^

[theladyfeylene]

I did! I couldn't make it an actual threesome - damn Scar just wouldn't do it! - but I got as much in as I could!

Thank you! Yeah, Dante is totally in love with Rose's body. It's so creepy! And Scar and Rose are so oddly cute together.

Yes! I needed a way for her to explain away her rot.

Thank you!

[imagines]

Is it bad that I reacted to this with "Awwww!"? >.>;; I know it's not supposed to be fluffy. But Rose is such a fluffy girl! ♥ Dante is evil, evil, evil! I barely know who she is, and she creeps me out-- while being hot, at least in Lyra's body. What an odd combination.

Scar. Mmm. *w* Scar/Rose...heh. I hadn't even considered it til now. It doesn't squick me, but my brain is trying to reconcile their ages...how old are they? They are very pretty together, in any case. :D

Small typo: "his gate stiff and hurried"-- that should be "gait."

[theladyfeylene]

No, it isn't bad! The Scar/Rose stuff was very 'awwwww' inducing. :D It would have been pure fluff if Dante hadn't been involved. :D She's very, very creepy.

Uh, Scar's I think in his late twenties, and Rose is around 18 or 19. So it's about a ten year age difference. :D

Gah, thank you!

[imagines]

From what I know of Dante, I think that Dante fluff is nearly, if not completely, impossible.

Ten years...meep. Well, he's respectable enough, even with the 'sploding of people. I doubt he'd hurt her, unless she tried to learn alchemy. Although he might be a little mad if he found out about her wanting Cain to be alive again. (Does he know about anything that happened in those episodes?)

[theladyfeylene]

Dante fluff....yeah, it's impossible. She's too twisted and manipulative. *shudders* And she doesn't even hide it! There's one line in episode 49 that never fails to creep me out.

Eh, ten years isn't too bad. And he is respectable and he's protective of her and cares about her. I.... have no idea, actually. I don't think so, though.

Excellent

[redrose999]

Dante is the perfect temptress... This was very well done. I love how you write Dante. She's soo

EVIL....

And her behavior towards Rose in contrast to Scar's... Wonderful! You can see he treats Rose with respect and that he cares rather than covets like Dante.

Another awesome fic...

Squees and runs around waving her hands!

Re: Excellent

[theladyfeylene]

She really is. She's so... I can't even put it into words. She has this almost seedy Victorian aura about her, all prim and proper but black and corrupt and underneath.

Thank you! I always thought that Scar did care about Rose, even if he used her. :D I'm so glad you enjoyed!

[anonymous]

Ahhhhhhhhhh, your stories never cease to make me happy.....I love how gentlemanly Scar is here and how Dante keeps pushing things all around.....Rose is adorable too!

-SnakeCharmerFoxx@aol.com

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you! :D