Now Billy’s fingers were caressing the skin on his neck and drawing across his lips. Pete opened his mouth to grasp one of Billy’s fingers between his lips and received a hard slap to the cheek for his trouble
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Re: Part 3
anonymous
January 21 2010, 08:57:42 UTC
Holy crap, this was amazing! XD
Just the right amount of sex and the right amount of S&M. And I love how Billy brought up all sorts of things he should be pissed off about, but then just ended up being all remorseful and apologetic anyway. Because he's Billy, and he's just too nice. People keep on using him (WHITE keeps on using him) and he just continues to be... Billy.
And all the details about kink equipment...! Phew! Good job there too.
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Just the right amount of sex and the right amount of S&M. And I love how Billy brought up all sorts of things he should be pissed off about, but then just ended up being all remorseful and apologetic anyway. Because he's Billy, and he's just too nice. People keep on using him (WHITE keeps on using him) and he just continues to be... Billy.
And all the details about kink equipment...! Phew! Good job there too.
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Thank you!
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I love how you brought up Billy's history of victimization, & how it effected this scenario.
The real challenge of VB Fic is keeping scenes in character while creating a more in-depth view of those characters. This you did perfectly!
BTW, Pete/Billy usually makes me cringe, yet this was so hot. My mind, it is boggled.
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