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#006 - Three

Jul 08, 2016 02:21

Title: Three
Author: kaleid_scopic
Fandom/Characters/Pairing: f(x)/EXO / kai/krystal/sehun
Rating/Warnings: G
Challenge # & Prompt: #006 - the distance
Word Count: 412w

( Clinking of spoons and forks against plates. Three people sit on a table near the window, a man and a woman on one side, and another man on the other side. )

group: exo, group: f(x), #006: the distance

Comments 2

kisoap July 8 2016, 09:26:30 UTC

oh man...poor sehun ):
i really liked how you interpreted the prompt - distance can be so close yet so far. and the way that distance shows when sehun's distancing himself from all their happiness by lying wOW OUCH THAT LAST LINE TOO
this is so good!

kaleid_scopic July 9 2016, 17:52:12 UTC

I know, I'm sorry sehun :( oh wow I'm so happy you liked this, and I'm glad the point got through! I'm actually afraid that last line was a bit abrupt/forced, but glad you liked it :') thank you so much for reading and commenting <3