Comments | thekiller00: Onyx, Chapter 1

thekiller00

Onyx, Chapter 1

Oct 02, 2007 02:21

A/N: I know what your thinking. Why am I starting a new fic when I barely post on my other two. But I have posts about half way done for them and the muse for this fic wont leave me alone.

I wont give any background info like I normally do when I start a new fic, because it is fairly simple to figure out in this post. Plus as you can tell by the ( Read more... )

onyx

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ryanforever October 2 2007, 09:12:45 UTC

Killer

I like the AU that you have set up but I'm sorry - I gave up on the song lyrics half way through. There were too many and they aren't the reason that I love OC fic.

I hope that you don't mind but I understand if you do.

thekiller00 October 2 2007, 09:16:24 UTC

Thats alright Julie. I just mainly put those in to set up the type of band that Ryan is in.

moonspell4 October 2 2007, 11:46:58 UTC

Interesting concept, I mean Halley as Ryan's mom... that's bound to have a couple of fun moments.

As julie did i gave up the lyrics even before they started, you could have just postes what they played, or skip that.

^Good job
RJ

thekiller00 October 2 2007, 17:13:11 UTC

As I told Julie, I only posted the lyrics because it is the first post in the fic and I wanted everyone to get the idea of the kind of band that Ryan is in.

I would have posted links so they could play, but I have no clue on how to do that.

ocmiss October 2 2007, 20:24:40 UTC

Really liked it, and the thought of Hailey as Ryan's mom.
Never read something like this I think.
Great chap.

thekiller00 October 2 2007, 20:27:38 UTC

Thanks. Its always cool to get reviews from new people.

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thekiller00 October 4 2007, 08:00:10 UTC

Thanks for the beta offer. I will let you know when I have a new chapter for this ready.

As for the lyrics, I didn't think at the time to put them in italics. Plus I think this will be one of only a few times that a post has that many different lyrics in it. I just wanted the readers to get an idea of the type of band that Ryan is in.

I would have caught the grammer errors, because I have a habbit of reading fics that I have copies of and ficing things like that. But when I was typing this up, it was late and the muse had been nagging me for this fic.

thekiller00 October 8 2007, 02:42:27 UTC

My email is in my profile. Go ahead and email me and I will send you chapter 2 of Onyx and you can beta it.