Illicit Fantasies (one-off)

Aug 19, 2015 13:04

Title: Illicit Fantasies (one-shot)
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[length] short story, [type] pwp, ms bingo, [pairing] belldom

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wangoes August 19 2015, 11:42:00 UTC
Oh my god B, this is so good!! I'm never really sure how to comment on peoples work so excuse my incoherence :DDD I love how you described the feelings and this whole thing just seemed so..sweet to me?
Also this “Hey, can I come in?” from the outside before the door opens. You open your eyes lazily just as he releases a surprised ‘oh’ '' made me giggle, its just precious. :DD

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thekeyholder August 20 2015, 09:50:13 UTC
Ah, no worries, your comment is perfectly fine and appreciated! :D Haha, just imagining that happening makes me giggle, glad you liked it too!

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nuraicha August 19 2015, 12:44:38 UTC
Oh yes, this was hot but especially sensual! More hot the sensual way that the "sex" way, do you understand what I mean? I didn't expect Matt to accept his invitation that willingly, oh you stupid fools! I'm glad they caught up with each other though, better late than never!

For someone who generally avoids writing smut, you're quite good at it, did you know that? ;) All the little details, like the kiss on Dom's thigh and how Matt hid his face while Dom was jerking him off, were priceless. Special bonus points because Matt Bellamy with a mouth full of cock >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Great story Brigi! <3

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thekeyholder August 20 2015, 09:57:51 UTC
I'm happy you had that impression, I was kind of hoping for that! :D You know, I was a bit confused if I should tag this with the drones era tag, because it could work in any period? So I didn't choose anything in the end.

Haha, I have to tell myself that I'm not a fraud for writing about stuff that I don't know much about (and will probably never know xD). It's difficult to put into words the images you have in your mind. Glad you liked that it was Matt doing the sucking; it was the other way around first. Tbh, the whole story was supposed to be different (kind of wanted to link it with a past life), but I don't think it would have worked with the narration.

So glad you liked it! <3

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nuraicha August 31 2015, 18:52:49 UTC
As it could work for any era, I wouldn't tag it with any, unless you had a previous idea of the era! I think I imagined Dom with blond hair in this, if it helps as an indication ( ... )

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eternally_cave August 19 2015, 13:33:59 UTC
Ah I'm so glad to see you back here :D
And this was really hot, I don't get why you don't write smut that often because you're really good at it!!! <3

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thekeyholder August 20 2015, 09:59:18 UTC
I'm here, I check LJ every day. I just finding it so hard to write even personal posts, if that makes any sense. xD

Maybe I should try more. So glad you liked it, thank you! <3

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darkshining August 19 2015, 23:16:56 UTC
this is SUUUUCH a great fic, really really amazing <3 It felt so nice and intimate, even though it was their first time. Just amazing writing, loved it ^-^

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thekeyholder August 20 2015, 10:01:07 UTC
Aww, thanks so much! <3 That's a real confidence boost, as I don't really write smut. Thanks for reading and commenting! Also love your icon :D

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burnettc August 21 2015, 02:06:04 UTC
It's so lovely I'm melting *___*

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thekeyholder August 23 2015, 17:17:34 UTC
Aww, thanks! :D

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