Oh my god B, this is so good!! I'm never really sure how to comment on peoples work so excuse my incoherence :DDD I love how you described the feelings and this whole thing just seemed so..sweet to me? Also this “Hey, can I come in?” from the outside before the door opens. You open your eyes lazily just as he releases a surprised ‘oh’ '' made me giggle, its just precious. :DD
Oh yes, this was hot but especially sensual! More hot the sensual way that the "sex" way, do you understand what I mean? I didn't expect Matt to accept his invitation that willingly, oh you stupid fools! I'm glad they caught up with each other though, better late than never!
For someone who generally avoids writing smut, you're quite good at it, did you know that? ;) All the little details, like the kiss on Dom's thigh and how Matt hid his face while Dom was jerking him off, were priceless. Special bonus points because Matt Bellamy with a mouth full of cock >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
I'm happy you had that impression, I was kind of hoping for that! :D You know, I was a bit confused if I should tag this with the drones era tag, because it could work in any period? So I didn't choose anything in the end.
Haha, I have to tell myself that I'm not a fraud for writing about stuff that I don't know much about (and will probably never know xD). It's difficult to put into words the images you have in your mind. Glad you liked that it was Matt doing the sucking; it was the other way around first. Tbh, the whole story was supposed to be different (kind of wanted to link it with a past life), but I don't think it would have worked with the narration.
As it could work for any era, I wouldn't tag it with any, unless you had a previous idea of the era! I think I imagined Dom with blond hair in this, if it helps as an indication
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this is SUUUUCH a great fic, really really amazing <3 It felt so nice and intimate, even though it was their first time. Just amazing writing, loved it ^-^
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Also this “Hey, can I come in?” from the outside before the door opens. You open your eyes lazily just as he releases a surprised ‘oh’ '' made me giggle, its just precious. :DD
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For someone who generally avoids writing smut, you're quite good at it, did you know that? ;) All the little details, like the kiss on Dom's thigh and how Matt hid his face while Dom was jerking him off, were priceless. Special bonus points because Matt Bellamy with a mouth full of cock >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Great story Brigi! <3
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Haha, I have to tell myself that I'm not a fraud for writing about stuff that I don't know much about (and will probably never know xD). It's difficult to put into words the images you have in your mind. Glad you liked that it was Matt doing the sucking; it was the other way around first. Tbh, the whole story was supposed to be different (kind of wanted to link it with a past life), but I don't think it would have worked with the narration.
So glad you liked it! <3
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And this was really hot, I don't get why you don't write smut that often because you're really good at it!!! <3
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Maybe I should try more. So glad you liked it, thank you! <3
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