Guiding Moonlight

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“My lord, Sir Ali, the draper from Turkey, is here. He says he brought his finest fabrics just for Your Highness,” the servant announced and bowed.

The king was still absorbed in his own thoughts even after a couple of minutes. Rumour had it - rightly - that he was a pensive and judicious man, but that morning there was something particularly

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[ms_belle10]

Aww, Brigi! I know I just recently read this and commented, but I'm so happy that you got it posted so soon! You did an amazing job with this, dear! *hugs*

[thekeyholder]

Thanks, Ashley! I'm glad you liked it and thank again for editing it so quickly! ;)

[erasedjanna]

I was happy to hear that you've written more! I feel like I repeat myself every time I comment on your stories but I can't help the fact that I liked this idea and loved the fic! AU fics are always fun to read and I would like to read more fantasy related fics.

But, poor, worrying King Dominic. It really showed that he cared about Captain Matthew and I liked the flashbacks (memories). They showed that they really were close and very, very good friends and aww. I always like flashbacks in stories. And Dominic's mom seemed to be a lovely lady (though when I read her name, I instantly thought about The Tudors tv-series and Anne Boleyn, but anyway). And necklaces, I liked them!

The captain sighed with relief as he put his head on Dominic’s strong shoulder and clutched the king’s clothes tightly, afraid that he might disappear, like the delicate moonlight.

I had a image of this in my head and aww. They really missed each other. And good describing here, I like the 'delicate moonlight' thing.

Loved it <3 Thank you for this, Brigi! I

[thekeyholder]

AU fics are always fun to read and I would like to read more fantasy related fics.

I so agree! I'm rereading Harry Potter (and watching the films afterward too haha), so all I want to do is to write fantasies! I think I will post Someone Special part 2 today.

But, poor, worrying King Dominic. It really showed that he cared about Captain Matthew and I liked the flashbacks (memories). They showed that they really were close and very, very good friends and aww.

Same here, I think my favourite parts were the flashbacks! I'm so glad that they were true proofs of how much they cared about each other!

That is funny that you thought about Anne Boleyn, because I was thinking about queen names and she was the first one who came to my mind.

They really missed each other. And good describing here, I like the 'delicate moonlight' thing.

Oh, so glad to hear that, Janna! :D:D:D Thank you so much and I'm really glad that you like fairytales, I think I will do more! <3

*hugs*

[thekeyholder]

Y'know what? You should publish that as a little book. :3

Nawww! :') Maybe if I write a collection of fairytales? :D I'm seriously thinking about it! I think I will choose another music drabble as well which can be turned into a tale.

I melted. My heart just went all warm and weird. What are you doing to me, woman. D:

Haha, you're so cute! I'm so happy you liked it, I must admit it's one of my favourite pieces. :3 Thank you again for your comment, it always makes me smile!

*hugs*

[laurad2609]

I totally loved everything about this! It was sweet and emotional and...and...ah! I sure got well after reading this!! I just recently downloaded and played Sims Medieval and Dom was the king there :)) Aaand I watched Merlin (and Arthur looks a lot like Dom) so I guess all of these were signs that you will post. I really love stories with this...old kinda theme. Like...with kings and dragons and stuff. I always loved those. And this story is just what I wanted today :) You have no idea how... awesome it made me feel :)

One tiny thing, though. You forgot the "d" in my username :)) (I don't want to sound like a bitch, it's just that another girl now gets my get well soon gift and I'm jealous)

Anyway, as I told you in my text, you made my day posting this...and then dis-made my day and made it back while I read it :) *hugs*

[thekeyholder]

LOL LOL I corrected the AN and now the story is dedicated to you! I'm sorry, I was in a hurry! xD

I really love stories with this...old kinda theme. Like...with kings and dragons and stuff. I always loved those.

You know, all I want to write are fantasies right now! xD I guess that's because I saw LOTR and I'm rereading and watching Harry Potter. :P I'm so happy you liked it, dear sis! <3

*hugs*

[easilyglorious]

There aren't enough fairy tales in this world... I'm so happy you wrote this - it's beautiful and heart-warming!

I loved it!

<3333

[thekeyholder]

Awww, thank you! I'm kind of in this mood to write fantastic stories, so I might produce a few fairytales!

*hugs*