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Repressed memories (one-off)

Jul 27, 2010 21:08

Title:Repressed memories(one-off)
Author:thekeyholder (Brigi)
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: 15+
Summary: Heat wave+ half-naked boys+ memories= sexy stuff
Feedback: is what I like the most (well, after Muse and chocolate, of course!).
Warnings: Memories can be painful.
Disclaimers: As you probably know, I don’t own Muse but original aspects belong to me.
AN: An ( Read more... )

fanfiction, slash, [type] angst, muse, [type] suspense, [type] au, [length] short story, [fic] repressed memories, [type] first time, [era] future!muse, [pairing] belldom, [type] introspection

Comments 22

ashamedbliss July 27 2010, 18:42:09 UTC

I love this! Just a little bit confusing with the last couple of paragraphs as to who is speaking, but it's wonderfully touching and also pretty hot in some parts...:

Dom stepped closer, whispering into Matt’s right ear “It was extremely sexual.” Matt felt Dom licking off the tiny water drops on his back. He shivered with pleasure.

I could quote that whole thing but this was the best line for me. One offs are often the best! :) (but I do love You Are My Sun!)

thekeyholder July 30 2010, 06:10:21 UTC

Jeez, I totally forgot about replying to comments! :O

Ah, thanks! Well, I was pretty confused when I wrote this but I hope you could make it out finally? :P

Thanks again for reading and commenting!

bitter_end90 July 27 2010, 18:53:06 UTC

GOD, that was...hot...and beautiful xP!!! Just WOW!!!
Amaaaazing one-off, and it surely will help me every time I feel a little down ;). Thanks for the dedication!

Loved the last paragraph!

Their lips and bodies pressed against each other, Matt’s coldness mixing with Dom’s fever (ahem, nice image to survive the heat ;D)

Thanks for sharing!

thekeyholder July 30 2010, 06:12:50 UTC

You were my first friend around here so you totally deserve the dedication! ;)

Danke, lieber Freund! *hugs*

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thekeyholder July 30 2010, 06:13:30 UTC

Ah, thanks. :D *blushes* I'm so glad you liked it!

altogingenting July 27 2010, 20:36:51 UTC

Lovely!
Wonderful one-off :D

thekeyholder July 30 2010, 06:14:17 UTC

Yeah, I plan on writing more one-offs. ;) Thanks for reading and commenting!

starlight_myth July 28 2010, 04:55:28 UTC

Arrrggghhhhh!!!!
This was awesome Brigi!!!

It was sweet, hot, touching and sexy.....
Wow it was just amazing!

I'm so happy that I woke up to this :D

thekeyholder July 30 2010, 06:15:30 UTC

Thank you so much, you know your support means a lot to me!

I'm so happy that I could make your morning brighter!