You are my Sun Chapter 1.

[thekeyholder]

Title: You are my Sun Chapter 1. The beginning
Author:thekeyholder (Brigi)
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: For everyone?
Summary: Matt and Dom are still in school. At first, they are not in good terms but things will evolve. *wink*
Feedback: gives me power to continue. I would like you to be honest and tell me everything you like or don’t like about my story. :)

Comments

[ophelia1971]

Hello, and welcome! :-D

It's always lovely to have new writers.

I like the idea of your story. And teen!Belldom is very popular in this community. *grins*

However, I do think it'd be a good idea if you were to get someone to beta your story for you. There were certain words / expressions that were hard to understand, the grammar was a little off and I got the impression (please correct me if I'm wrong) that English isn't your first language?

Anyway, I'd be happy to help if you like, and I know there are other people around who probably wouldn't mind either. Just ask!

Look forward to the next chapter. :-D

[thekeyholder]

Hi!! Thanks for reading! ;)

Actually, I had a beta, miss_ariake but she is so thoughtful; maybe she didn't want to "offend" me by correcting everything. :P I'd be glad if you would look through my next chapters too! You were right, English is not my first language but only the 3rd O.o

[ophelia1971]

Hi there

I'd be delighted to look over your work. :-D
I'll PM you my email address.

[starlight_myth]

I'm so happy to see your update Brigi!!!!

Excellent start!!! I'm totally hooked to this!!!
I love the way you write, your descriptions are very good!

I can't for the next chapter!!! I'm so glad you updated!!!
*hugs*

[thekeyholder]

Thanks, Mythili! :)I'm glad you liked the first chapter. Hopefully, you will think the same about the next ones.

*hugs back* Thank you so much for your support!

[altogingenting]

You posted! :D
You had no reason to be nervous, this was great. Looking forward to read more :)

[thekeyholder]

Thanks, Charlotte! ;) I'll try to upload as fast as I can, okay?

[syntonicmemory]

Hey there! Welcome to the comm!

This fic has an interesting start, and I'm excited to see where you'll go with it. I like the rocky relationship you've put the two boys in to begin with.

I'm glad you decided to post this and share it with everyone! I'm looking forward to your next update. :)

[thekeyholder]

Hi!!! :D

Yup, the boys aren't friends at the beginning but things will change. I'm glad that I posted, look at the lovely comments! I can feel the love! <3

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[hullabaloohush]

Hey! This was a really good start!!!! I love your story! Please write more, MORE!!!! ;P Looking forward to reading it!!!

[thekeyholder]

Hello! You are writing the Mails and Letters fic, right? I'm so glad you updated I'm going to read it. :)

Thanks for your appreciation! I will try to satisfy your curiosity!