Comments | thekayla: FIC: Falling In Three Easy Steps (PG-13)

thekayla

FIC: Falling In Three Easy Steps (PG-13)

Aug 06, 2006 03:57

Title: Falling In Three Easy Steps
Character/Pairing: Sucre, Hector, the family
Genre: Gen, Pre-series
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2501
Summary: Take one cup blizzard, four teaspoons evil cousin, three tablespoons annoying siblings, cousins and their toys, mix and set out to cool overnight.
Author’s Notes: For thelana. Happy belated birthday :) And I did ( Read more... )

fic type: gen, rating: pg-13, show: prison break

Comments 14

Evil comment porn (cliffhanger!) steralizetheemo August 6 2006, 08:43:52 UTC

Title: Drift ( ... )

Re: Evil comment porn (cliffhanger!) thekayla August 6 2006, 08:47:42 UTC

D: Meanie!

Re: Evil comment porn (cliffhanger!) steralizetheemo August 6 2006, 09:12:40 UTC

A brief squeeze brought him to reality, the pleasure ripping through him as he felt his orgasm pulsing through him. More moans escaped his lips, ragged from kissing. Bite marks lovingly circled his shoulders, knowning the marks were...his pride. His...scars of pride, for surviving so many nights with this man ( ... )

Re: Evil comment porn (cliffhanger!) thekayla August 6 2006, 09:19:18 UTC

:O

You've totally captured my version of Daddy Bagwell perfectly :O Except that my Daddy Bagwell leaves Teddy to his own devices afterward and goes back to his own room 'cause he's a mean, snarky jerk.

But you incorporated it into porn :O I love you.

Thread 6

steralizetheemo August 6 2006, 09:57:52 UTC

Title: It's a Date ( ... )

thekayla August 6 2006, 10:03:17 UTC

*dies* x.x

uponplains August 6 2006, 16:28:28 UTC

Dude you have no idea how happy this fic made me! I love it when people write other characters! This was so good and funny and really in character for everyone. I could totally see it. Really really nice job!

thekayla August 6 2006, 21:04:48 UTC

:D Thanks!

crawdadorgy August 7 2006, 03:14:30 UTC

I really.really.really liked this.I loved the characterzations of his family member. Especially Hector ruining everything.

thekayla August 7 2006, 09:11:27 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

thelana August 7 2006, 15:20:40 UTC

Eeeee, thank you so much. Those were totally my favorite parts :)

He knows Hector’s borrowed his underwear no matter how many times he denies it.

And as a rule, Hector is never allowed to wash any of the clothes he borrows because Fernando still can’t get over his drawer full of pink socks.

:D

thekayla August 7 2006, 19:37:01 UTC

:) I'm glad you liked it!