[APH] Thrum, Pop and Steady

Jan 05, 2011 23:37

Title: Thrum, Pop and Steady
Category: Axis Powers Hetalia / Hetalia World Series
Characters/Pairings: fem!Japan/England
Genre/Rating/Warnings: romance/PG15/sex, AU

Summary/Excerpt: Arthur runs (literally) into a mysterious woman on a lonely Christmas Eve.

A/N: Somehow, it turned out like this. ^^;

'What do you want?' Arthur asked and Kiku turned to look at him. 'I don't have any money on me. At least not the amount they probably pay you for.' )

fandom: hetalia, pairing: england/japan, char: japan, ! oneshot, @ love_and_tea, genre: romance, char: england

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chromatic_coma January 5 2011, 20:50:47 UTC
shit i accidentally lost the comment i was writing... let's see here

I really love the way you made fem!Kiku very sort of openly a sexual creature, as opposed to her male counterpart's utter prudishness. It was a really jarring difference but in this setting it worked really well. And by having her be so willing to be used by Arthur as a replacement, she is still really, really Kiku regardless.

I really enjoyed this fic because you explored this other side to a character without losing their identity, which worked out really well.

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disownmereturns January 6 2011, 00:16:33 UTC
^^;

Yay! /O/ I'm glad to hear the Japan-ness is still there. I thought I might have lost it somewhere because I dun write fem!nations often X'DD

Thank youuu! :)

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chromatic_coma January 6 2011, 00:19:05 UTC
Now that I think about it, you wrote fem!Japan with Greece before once, right? Even between both fics she seems to show different sides of the same character, but yeah, somehow the Japan-ness is always there <33

You're welcome!

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disownmereturns January 6 2011, 15:49:55 UTC
kjhdfkjghdfjkgh Yes I did X'DD /embarrassed now 8D

Hm, point there~ /chinstroke

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tokei January 7 2011, 13:36:29 UTC
I'm not the requester but oh, I liked this very much! I love how you wrote fem!Kiku, that she's a club hostess and the way she, ahem, 'comforts' Authur. The sex part was very well-written, not tasteless or in-your-face at all, and I really liked the way you ended the fic, with Kiku's address and giving Authur a choice. For some reason Authur only coming to his senses halfway through drunk!sex makes me LOL. XD

This was great to read, overall. :D

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disownmereturns January 7 2011, 14:17:14 UTC
>////< Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :D

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summermoonhana January 15 2011, 03:40:19 UTC
Hello, requester here! And wow, not quite what I expected when I posted my prompt. But man, did I love this! <3 I like how you've made fem!Japan here different from her male counterpart in being more sexually open, yet still retained the essence of the character. And the ending was very lovely with the little bits of details. I'm sorry, I feel like I'm not articulating myself well enough, but let me say thank you so much for this!

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disownmereturns January 15 2011, 04:02:51 UTC
Yay! /O/ I'm really glad you liked it :'3

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