The Commander, the Soldier, the Deserter

[theirblinggirl]

Title: The Commander, the Soldier, the Deserter
Author: theirblinggirl
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jaeil (sort of, again. and the other sort-of-pairings that I don't want to spoil yet)
Word count: 1639
Summary: They leave for the mission, the others watch them, but not everyone is as resigned as Ahn Jaehyo.
A/N: Here I am with the second installment to In the

Comments

[ladyasriel]

first of all, "Special thanks and lots of love to ladyasriel because she's been so supportive and inquisitive and lovely <3" KDAMSDFANS I squealed, why are you so adorable? Ç_Ç <3

but now to the story, (I had to read twice because in my first try I think I read it too fast OTL) you wrote it in a way that we had to read until the end to really understand as a whole - or maybe I'm just slow - but the effect is great either way. when you wrote the first part and asked what we thought it should be like if there was a second, I could never imagine it'd be this... broad. girl, you're creative lol just keep going with what is in your mind and you won't disappoint us :>

this,

"[...] the face from last night, with red eyes and slightly trembling lips, and all he hears are those desperate words whispered into the deaf darkness when he thought Minhyuk was asleep.

Those simple words of “I don’t want to die yet, Captain…”"

was awesome. really.

and Taeil... still a mistery for me. this last part... why, Taeil :|

[theirblinggirl]

BECAUSE IT'S TRUE!!!
I like to write for myself, but I'm really not persistent, so most of the time I just give up halfway into something if it's just for myself. However if it's for somebody or because I know somebody is expecting, I push myself through it much easier. So really, thanks^^

Well yes, I kind of tried to... idk, make it a little bit more interesting with clues that are not quite that obvious till you see the whole picture, I think. And because I love suspense and I think it fits this story... Even though I'm sure at least Kwonnie and Kyung were quite obvious since, like, my descriptions of Kwon are pretty gushy all the time because he may not be my bias BUT HE IS JUST SO ADORABLE OKAY I LOVE HIM TO DEATH ASHDJFGHL<33 Squishy gorgeous kitty boy <333

[ladyasriel]

/ridiculously late, I'm so sorry T_T

ah, so that's why <3 I'm the opposite, if I know someone's expecting I can't get myself to finish it lol

AND WE SUFFER THE SAME KWONNIE SYNDROME! he's not my bias but ÇASDNADSBFDAS I CAN'T RESIST HIM t_t but anyway, he wasn't obvious to me (?). even though the "the only one with his head high and his face bright," was obvious indeed... I told you I'm slow. OTL you're right, it does make things more interesting with the not so obvious clues. including this Taeil in the second chapter, because it changed everything I had imagined with the first one skdajnsdafbsadf it's a nice ending (making me more curious and -no)

[theirblinggirl]

I'm late all the time too, it's alright~

(would you hate me if I told you i've seen that squishy smile up real close and that is why I can't ever get over how adorable and amazingly lovely he is OTL OTL OTL)

I'll try to write the third part soon (even tho exams are nearing so suddenly there are all the things in the world to study XD) but definitely won't give it up now^^

Thanks as always, love <3

[blackheart_lies]

I'm not confused. I am excited!! I have a good feeling about this fic.
<3

[theirblinggirl]

I'm so glad to hear that:))) I'll try to work hard not to disappoint you, then^^

Thank you for your comment, dear! (and also, I love your icon<33)

[fluffyxcloud]

This is fantastic! i love the mystery and allure in this story!! (Jiho's part really was so emotional and wonderful!) and you put things in a way that gives me a gazillion questions, but not in a bad way--in an anticipatory way! Like...I REALLY want to know what happens! I love this! great idea, great follow through!

I hope you'll continue to have many wonderful idea and fill this BattlefieldAU with many, many stories! ^ ^ (pleasebecauseiloveit)

<3

[theirblinggirl]

WOAHH THANK YOU SO MUCH <33 I'm just really-really happy that you liked this because I've also read some of your fics and they are really great (i'm not sure i've commented before and I'm really sorry about that :S) but just, you make me so happy <33 I hope the next part(s) will not disappoint you, and please do ask anything that is not uncovered or that has left you curious^^

Thanks for the lovely comment once again<3