fic: Star Trek: You Just Can't Win [PG-13]

[vestigialwords]

Fandom: Star Trek XI (2009)
Title: You Just Can't Win
Author: colours_unseen
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4000
Summary: She was pretty--he wasn’t blind--but he hadn’t come to Starfleet to get ass. When half of your energy is spent trying not to throw up after every flight simulation and the other half is wasted on babysitting Jim Kirk, there isn’t much left for

Comments

[morlockiness]

This is so amazing! I loved your style, the dialogue, the end. Great work.

[vestigialwords]

Thank you! That really means a lot because I struggled with the dialogue. :D

[vestigialwords]

Thanks! Oh man, M/U is insatiable, aren't they? They just hooked me one day without warning and never let go. As for kissin'... I guess we'll see where they take me. :)

[wingedcheetah]

That was great! :) I loved the bit at the end ... haha, even Bones knows her first name! :D Wonderful characterizations and great narration style!

[vestigialwords]

Oo, Thank you!

For some reason I always imagined that he knew it, simply to have something over Kirk.

[skywardprodigal]

So much fun. Excellent McCoy.

And those fighting moves of his? For sure Kelley's McCoy. :D <#

[vestigialwords]

Thank you! I had so much fun writing for him.

If I couldn't have my family, I would want Kelley's McCoy to be my dad. True Story.

[ancarett]

What a great fic. I'd never thought of these two interacting much but you did a wonderful job of making that possible. I love how we see McCoy's chivalrous side as well as Uhura's capability.

And the final line? Killer!

[vestigialwords]

Oh man, thank you so much!

You know, after ST:XI, I imagined them as quiet, behind-the-scenes, sort of secret friends. I couldn't pinpoint why for the life of me though.