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[faeryglitter]

Hello everyone, this is Mercedes a.k.a. Dahlia. My beta-reader is away until Monday, and I was wondering if someone with a good eye for tense changes and sentence fluency could possibly donate their time to help me? It's for a good cause, honest! Non-profit organization, and I won't sell your name to telemarketers. Plus there are complimentary cookies.

Thanks!