As promised.
I finished chapter 8, and so I will begin to post chapters. (Hopefully weekly, we'll see how that goes.)
Angel's Creed chapter one can be found here, in my writing journal (which you may feel free to watch, if you like).
I'm going to put a feedback list on every chapter, as a sort of prompt to let you guys know what sorts of things I want to hear back from you. There will be general items and chapter specific items.
If you're going to leave me feedback (and please do! It helps a lot!) please leave it there, and not here. Thank you.
[Edit] ffffff after putting that up I begin to wonder if chapter 2 would be a better opening chapter, because it's...well, it's got stuff happening in it and I feel like chapter one lacks that. It'd need some editing to slip in the info of course, but that wouldn't be terribly difficult, I think.
When I put up chapter 2 I'll ask what you guys think.
Angel's Creed chapter one can be found here, in my writing journal (which you may feel free to watch, if you like).
I'm going to put a feedback list on every chapter, as a sort of prompt to let you guys know what sorts of things I want to hear back from you. There will be general items and chapter specific items.
If you're going to leave me feedback (and please do! It helps a lot!) please leave it there, and not here. Thank you.
[Edit] ffffff after putting that up I begin to wonder if chapter 2 would be a better opening chapter, because it's...well, it's got stuff happening in it and I feel like chapter one lacks that. It'd need some editing to slip in the info of course, but that wouldn't be terribly difficult, I think.
When I put up chapter 2 I'll ask what you guys think.