"Proposal" (faint Arthur/Gwen and Merlin/Gwen)

Feb 08, 2009 04:11

Title: 01: Proposal
Author: Keenir
Spoilers: 1.01-1.02, 1.04 & the first half of 1.03 - mostly that last one there.
Pairing(s): shades of Arthur/Gwen and Merlin/Gwen
Character(s): Gwen, Arthur
Word count: 443
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: None of them are mine.

Summary: Arthur makes Gwen an offer.

Author's notes: What did Arthur do between talking ( Read more... )

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scarlettpeony February 8 2009, 11:36:09 UTC
That was very good.

I liked how the conversation was so matter-of-fact but Arthur's thoughts were putting more depth into it. I could see Arthur offering to marry her in order to save her from death even as early as 1.3. He especially seemed shocked by finding the evidence, arresting her and listening to her protest her innocence. Even when he was forced to arrest her, like Morgana, it was clear he thought she was innocent.

The way Gwen is thinking in this fic is correct too. She is clearly flattered by the offer but at that very moment sees it as a way to escape death - which is believable from what any of us would feel as a human.

Brilliant ficlet! :)

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rodlox February 9 2009, 08:27:04 UTC
I don't have the words to thank you sufficiently. not sure I've gotten that much fb in a single post to any of my fics. (not since I left egroups)

thank you! I'm glad to know I got the voices right.

if I may ask, are there any fics (Merlin or otherwise) you'd like me to write for you? I'll give it my best shot.

again, thank you. (I can't say that enough)

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