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thefrenchgirl2

Mismatched - Chapter 1/? - Part 2/2

Nov 07, 2010 14:14

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fic, mismatched

Comments 6

moit November 7 2010, 13:31:29 UTC

The Orlijah dialogue is brilliant. I love the way Elijah's goading him on just to fucking slam him. LOVE!

thefrenchgirl2 November 7 2010, 13:39:00 UTC

I think I finally got this dialogue right with your help. It's exactly how I wanted to show Elijah, and I think he slams him even more this way! (Poor, Orli. Nah, poor Elijah. Orli's been such a jerk.)

msilverstar November 7 2010, 15:41:27 UTC

Definitely intriguing!

thefrenchgirl2 November 7 2010, 15:46:30 UTC

Thanks! :)

msilverstar December 30 2010, 06:08:20 UTC

Oh hey, could you put a tag on this chapter, so when I link to the first one in the lotrips list, I can also link to the tag?

thefrenchgirl2 December 31 2010, 13:15:35 UTC

Done!