Promises Dashed

[thefallisfirst]

I could have sworn I wrote a rhyming narrative. But somewheres I lost it. Or got confused. Either way, what I initially wanted to present is no longer available. So at the bequest of my one avid reader, I submit the following. A poem. A simple poema at that. Not very origional, but everyone likes a sappy love poem. Enjoy

Comments

[her__majesty]

Ah, I didn't write that actually. I probably should have given credit to thr writer considering i write on here. It's Chuck Palahnuik from the novel Haunted. Back cover.
Also, I'll never disappear from the internet so no worries. It kind of takes over my life? I don't write much of anything in here anymore. It's all teen angst that I know I'll get over. It's kind of funny knowing that everything I write now I will be looking back at in ten years laughing. It's nice to know someone finds it a bit interesting cause I feel like it's a twisted form of a lullaby putting everyone to sleep.
ANYWAY, YAY FOR RHYMING. That's basically all I wrote when I was 7-12 years of age. Of course, yours is a lot better, has more interprtation and depth.. you know. Cause you're good like that.

Please don't mind anything I'm typing. I studies 7 hours today and I feel like my brain has actually deteriorated. Hm.

You take all the classes I am interested in. Photography, Philosophy, and English. <3

I want to look back at your writing and tell you what you I think you should sumbit. Just give me a little time on that..just like a couple of days.
It's nice to know you're joinging the writing club. Criticism helps even if it's not what you want to hear sometimes.

That was such a long comment.