Fic: Deception to Perfection

Aug 09, 2011 00:03

Title: Deception to Perfection ( Read more... )

legend of the seeker, fanfic, cara/kahlan

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synergyfox August 9 2011, 07:36:54 UTC
Homg, so frakking epic.

;) Just adds more proof to show sex, snuggles and kisses were the real reason Rahlsikins fell. *srs nod*

Nghn...

Just nghnnn...

Now I'm just gonna keep sittin' here and staring like...


... )

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thedawn August 9 2011, 07:43:16 UTC
LOL...glad it was worth the wait;)

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frogfrizz August 9 2011, 08:18:16 UTC
This is.... nnngh, SO HOT. I particularly love how you wrote in the power play with Kahlan coming in as dominant at first, the subtle shifts between the two, and Kahlan's eventual giving in. This was an amazingly nuanced fic. Thank you for sharing!

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thedawn August 9 2011, 08:22:19 UTC
Thank you! I initially intended Kahlan to be a lot more in control, but Cara decided to get toppy, and...well, when Cara gets toppy, you pretty much just have to go with it;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun writing it:)

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raug_moss August 9 2011, 12:34:18 UTC
I don't even know how to describe how amazing this story is.
I love the idea of Cara being Kahlan's assignment.

You made Kahlan's inner conflict believable and very intriguing.
While Cara's just being Cara there's so much going on between them - I especially enjoyed the 'feelings' in the end.

It was a wonderful read.
Thank you for writing this!

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thedawn August 10 2011, 03:43:02 UTC
Thank you! Me and feelings, I can't get away from 'em. I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

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ladycoral August 9 2011, 12:49:28 UTC
This was just incredibly hot! I love the hint of "feelings" in the end

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thedawn August 10 2011, 03:43:12 UTC
Thank you:)

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swatkat24 August 9 2011, 13:33:06 UTC
This was fantastically hot! I really enjoyed this. <3

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thedawn August 10 2011, 03:43:28 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked it:)

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