Negotiations 33

[theconservatory]

Hi, guys! I've made a return to 2nd person, and the words began to flow, so this chapter didn't take so long. Please comment & let me know your thoughts. The more comments, the more psyched I get to write more.

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Comments

[rulisteningbj]

I loved your return to 2nd person! You had me on the edge of my seat reading and wondering what was going to happen next. Then you left me with a cliff hanger. Bad, Bad Girl!

Dee Dee

[theconservatory]

I liked going back to 2nd person too. It's a different lens and it gives me a different way to tell the story when first person it's quite there. I'm glad you liked it!! Thanks for letting me know you're reading!!

[nannanat]

Hey there. I love your writing and this story is different to what I normally read but am really enjoying it and learning something different. 2nd person POV is my fav and it wasn’t until I read some of your other stories that I realised how effective it can be. I have a story brewing in my head, in 2nd person, and that was directly inspired by you. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

[toto_too514]

This is all sorts of wonderful as always... you have kept Brian & Justin's true voices thoughout this very non-canon story. This is them.

And this... this literally made me laugh out loud. Slave-whisperer indeed!
“Because I’m the best looking submissive in here by a mile, and they think this collar means I’m their leader.”

And that's quite the cliff-hanger you left us with. Please don'y leave us hanging there long!

[minerva_1]

Justin has taken charge of the situation. First he proposed a way to carry out the show, and then he was the trusted figure for the submissive. It seems that they are on the way to making reality the idea of sharing a submissive, with different degrees of dominance between the two of them. It´d be an interesting experiment ;-)