Negotiations 32 - Customer Service - a deleted scene

Feb 02, 2020 00:25

Hi. (Refresh 32) One of the things that happens routinely when I write is the creation of a ton of dead branches on the tree of a chapter. That happens a lot with this series because there's no over-arching resolution that I'm fixated on. So, I was rereading tonight trying to find where I started 33 and I came across this branch which I really like ( Read more... )

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rulisteningbj February 2 2020, 21:48:27 UTC
Loved this deleted scene, perfect. My favorite line: it’s not fun to take the stairs when your cock feels like it’s carbo-loading to make weight.

Dee Dee

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theconservatory February 3 2020, 15:29:56 UTC
hey, thanks so much! I like that line, too. lol.

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toto_too514 February 3 2020, 00:32:36 UTC
What a wonderful treat! Definitely a different feel to this deleted scene, but it works too!

Justin's appraisal of the slave waiting room was great! His musings about what's in the locked filing cabinet were very Justin.

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