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[theconservatory]

I've wanted to open a second jewelry shop for a long time and finally, I did it. It's very theconservatory oriented with some...well...mature content. Welcome to The Twisted Screw. You can follow it on Twitter @TheTwistedScrew and Instagram @TheTwistedScrew.  I have active coupon codes for free shipping on orders of $25 or more in both shops right now-- U.S.

Comments

[occhidinotte]

Do I dare say that Brian is actually insecure? Did I get that right? Because insecure Brian have just caused a totally melt down... Somebody please mope me up the floor and put me back in some reasonable shape!

Sorry, such wonderful writing deserves more serious comments, but.. wow... I mean... W.O.W.... :)

I am gonna die without your posts, never the less, wish you (and your business) a great Holidays season.

[theconservatory]

thanks. I hope by what you're saying that it rang true to you? It's really challenging to write this side of Brian.

[occhidinotte]

It does, it really does...

[theconservatory]

thanks!

[snow_white79]

I really love this chapter... the honesty is fantastic because it just shows how much respect they have for one another and how open they can be. I love also how you remind us that Brian is human. Doms have a lot of pressure in order to please their sub. I love how Brian was honest with Justin about his feelings, and how Justin tried to support and reassure him and his role.
And the last line hits the nail.. Brian's love and desire for Justin, gives Justin the power... and Justin's love and desire for Brian, gives Brian the power.
It's a perfect circle with two forms of power that they are slowly beginning to realize.

[theconservatory]

This story is fun to write when it's superficial and when it begins to deepen. I'm learning things about them that I never really noticed before by letting this play out in very small increments. Thanks for the feedback!

[snow_white79]

P.s.
I love your Twisted Screw page! Awesome stuff :)

[theconservatory]

thanks!! It's a fun little shop, lol!

[dean1955]

The sheer intimacy and draw between these two is the main reason why this story is so special.

I see that Brian is realizing something most of us figured out a longtime ago, Justin is the one in control. Brian may be the one orchestrating and designing their time together, but it is Justin's pleasure and need that is driving the train.

I really enjoyed their frank talk about what is happening between them. Now at least Justin got a small glimpse of some the things going on in Brian's head. I loved the line about paying for Justin's gas. Too funny!

Congratulations on opening a new store. You must be so excited. Thanks for another wonderful and absorbing chapter.

[theconservatory]

My favorite words in this entire chapter are 'mileage reimbursement.' lol. I love when ridiculously mundane things make it into their pillow talk. I felt like I was wrestling with the jaws of life to get what I got out of Brian. I doubt it will satisfy Justin though...nothing ever does, lol.

[damietta]

As a client from 2008, I am standing and applauding your new store!

[theconservatory]

Aw, thank you! Just like this place, I needed another storefront to showcase my deviant side, lol.