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Maintenance 43/53

Jul 27, 2013 20:02

Go back to Maintenance 42 or start from the beginning.

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b/j fanfic, bdsm fic, 43, b/j fic, b/j bdsm, maintenance, spanking

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cryforwhat July 28 2013, 00:41:51 UTC

Waking up to this hot shopping scenario.
Brian you are such a big bad wolf!
Are they in the Mercedes, you know, the one who talks?

theconservatory July 28 2013, 00:43:34 UTC

I guess they are by default... but this story isn't really connected to BYBR, but it would be really funny if the car started ordering Justin around too!

cryforwhat July 28 2013, 03:59:14 UTC

I unintentionally referred The Car as "who", LOL. I think it would be realy funny if the cart started talking when they are making out, like "Mr. Kinney, estimated time of arrival is 5:45, you've 8 minutes left, have a safe trip home." NOOOOOOOOOO

I always think of the Maintenance series as some sort of sequel of BYBR, such as the second-person POV, the sensual explorations and house in WV, without the angst. Hell, they live in a R-18 fairy tale world for queers.

I re-read it and found a typo cryforwhat July 29 2013, 05:21:58 UTC

let's your tongue
==
let your tongue

Re: I re-read it and found a typo theconservatory July 29 2013, 05:50:31 UTC

it's correct as 'let's your tongue'...the [he] is implied. it's a stylistic thing.

Re: I re-read it and found a typo theconservatory July 29 2013, 14:04:20 UTC

actually, now that i'm more awake, we're both wrong. It's 'lets' without an apostrophe!

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