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[theconservatory]

So sorry for the delay, guys. Father's Day was insane.  I broke down and hired another assistant! Go back to Maintenance 40 or start from the beginning.

Comments

[snow_white79]

Has anyone ever told you that your chapter flow like poetry? I really loved the gentleness of this one. Of course, I also love the super-hot-intense-omfg chapters too ;)
So glad to see this updated...it's nice that Justin has returned to the painting groove, and it's always nice when he and Brian are together! :)
Great chapter: can't wait for more!!!!

Hugs,
Snow

[theconservatory]

Howdy! Actually, I almost wrote this as a poem but somewhere the prose took over. I'm glad you liked it. Sometimes I just want to soak in their connection with each other and kill most of the dialogue. It's refreshing.

[dean1955]

I would have to agree with Snow. The words and emotions in each chapter do flow like poetry. It also feels like a wonderful dance. When Brian and Justin are in sync and riding the same wave, they seem to operate as one.

You could real feel their desperate need and desire. Justin's anticipation and longing is similar to Christmas, a birthday, and a 99% off sale on my favorite pair of shoes. He just needs to hold on for a bit longer.

Desire, wanton, soothing, passion, control, release, and stimulating.....all words that tripped through my brain while reading this chapter.

[theconservatory]

Hey! As I told Snow above, this almost was a poem. In my mind, it started out that way. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

[shadownyc]

Great addition to the fic.

Glad to hear you've been so busy -- great news!

[theconservatory]

Thanks! I'm glad I'm busy too. :)

[randysgirl_645]

loved the way you wrote it!

[plumsuede]

thanks!!!

[toto_too514]

So peaceful, yet so intense. Loved it!

[plumsuede]

thank you!