amazing again. Damn Rachel owning a phone, starting to hate her now. Aww Emily! I know she cant go straight back to Naomi but it has to happen! Also JJ/Effy ftw
This was all kinds of beautiful and heartbreaking.
You've got lovely cute bits with JJ and Effy and Bricker, and this wonderful theme of family that you've got running through it.
And the almost kiss was just... oh. And the silly games they're playing.
The way you had them finally give into their feelings was just perfect. I could feel the tension and the want and how they were trying to resist.
And the sex scene! Jesus. That was some hawt stuff right there babes. You've giving me a run for my money ;) (Porn Queen approval here.)
I have no idea how you're going to make this okay. Or if it will be okay. It's going to take a lot to get Emily to leave Rachel for Naomi, especially as she's still unsure about Naomi's feelings, really. And now Em's going to feel like a massive asshole and I don't know how she's going to deal with that.
My heart aches for all of them. It's just wonderful.
Excellent update darling <3 <3
(Oh, and: you need to take the word 'moment' out of the 2nd line :))
this is just....fucking..epic!and heart wrenching and beautiful and sexy and just...i want to chain u up and force u to write this story all day everyday, lol.Sorry got a bit carried away there..erm yeh roll on next chapter ;)
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I say this every single time. But honestly, I love you. This is SO EFFING HEARTBREAKING AND WONDERFUL. AND I LOVE IT WITH ALL MAH HEART.
SO more please, and soon? :D
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This was all kinds of beautiful and heartbreaking.
You've got lovely cute bits with JJ and Effy and Bricker, and this wonderful theme of family that you've got running through it.
And the almost kiss was just... oh. And the silly games they're playing.
The way you had them finally give into their feelings was just perfect. I could feel the tension and the want and how they were trying to resist.
And the sex scene! Jesus. That was some hawt stuff right there babes. You've giving me a run for my money ;) (Porn Queen approval here.)
I have no idea how you're going to make this okay. Or if it will be okay. It's going to take a lot to get Emily to leave Rachel for Naomi, especially as she's still unsure about Naomi's feelings, really. And now Em's going to feel like a massive asshole and I don't know how she's going to deal with that.
My heart aches for all of them. It's just wonderful.
Excellent update darling <3 <3
(Oh, and: you need to take the word 'moment' out of the 2nd line :))
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