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brainy_poo November 29 2009, 22:14:14 UTC
*Heart breaks into a million little pieces ( ... )

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thecon12 November 30 2009, 12:16:35 UTC
*bandages heart back together ( ... )

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theatrebob1 November 29 2009, 22:38:20 UTC
NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COME BACK EMILYYYYYYYYYYY.

I say this every single time. But honestly, I love you. This is SO EFFING HEARTBREAKING AND WONDERFUL. AND I LOVE IT WITH ALL MAH HEART.

SO more please, and soon? :D

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thecon12 November 30 2009, 12:17:55 UTC
Thanks so much dude :) I'm really glad that you're enjoying this so far. Sorry about the broken heart, but the mess and drama isn't over quite yet!

<3

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thecon12 November 30 2009, 12:18:24 UTC
Thank you so much<3

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00emsy00 November 29 2009, 22:50:25 UTC
amazing again. Damn Rachel owning a phone, starting to hate her now. Aww Emily! I know she cant go straight back to Naomi but it has to happen! Also JJ/Effy ftw

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thecon12 November 30 2009, 12:19:02 UTC
Thanks a lot hun :) I'm glad you're liking this so far ^^

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flister November 29 2009, 23:01:09 UTC
Oh dear God...

This was all kinds of beautiful and heartbreaking.

You've got lovely cute bits with JJ and Effy and Bricker, and this wonderful theme of family that you've got running through it.

And the almost kiss was just... oh. And the silly games they're playing.

The way you had them finally give into their feelings was just perfect. I could feel the tension and the want and how they were trying to resist.

And the sex scene! Jesus. That was some hawt stuff right there babes. You've giving me a run for my money ;) (Porn Queen approval here.)

I have no idea how you're going to make this okay. Or if it will be okay. It's going to take a lot to get Emily to leave Rachel for Naomi, especially as she's still unsure about Naomi's feelings, really. And now Em's going to feel like a massive asshole and I don't know how she's going to deal with that.

My heart aches for all of them. It's just wonderful.

Excellent update darling <3 <3

(Oh, and: you need to take the word 'moment' out of the 2nd line :))

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sway05 November 30 2009, 05:34:42 UTC
this is just....fucking..epic!and heart wrenching and beautiful and sexy and just...i want to chain u up and force u to write this story all day everyday, lol.Sorry got a bit carried away there..erm yeh roll on next chapter ;)

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thecon12 November 30 2009, 12:32:36 UTC
Thanks so much hun :)

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thecon12 November 30 2009, 12:32:09 UTC
Afternoon babes ( ... )

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