The Dance of Deception 2/5 - Chapter Two - Deceiving (Part One)

[thecon12]

Chapter One - Facade (Part One)
Chapter One - Facade (Part Two)

The Dance of Deception - Chapter Two - Deceiving

Deceive, deceivingly, deceiving... these three variations of the same word all represent the same thing:

If you deceive someone it basically means that you are purposely tricking them into believing something that’s not true.

If

Comments

[hot_4_hahn]

smokin' hot, steamy, drunken sex - I love it!

Oh, I got my angst. It's so sad. But, I adore the drama. and you write it so beautifully. I could feel and commiserate with Erica's confusion and anger. You really have an amazing ability to take the reader into the moment. I'm always blown away.

[thecon12]

Thanks for your wonderful comment as always :) I'm glad you liked their drunken night and all the angsty drama that came with their morning after. I'm glad you can see where Erica's coming from, she's really confused and that's hurting her more than anything.

[greys_1]

ok so this was beyond hot. i was biting my lip reading this. like erica noring at a scraw biting, mmm. not many writers have dived into erica and callie just bang, having sex.

i loved how it was so heat of the moment, that they didn't talk, just smirk, talk about heat of the moment!

Erica's realisation of how the night unfolded the morning after was perfect, i love how you are in her head. gush! i need a cold cold shower. much love to you, and now i get to read part two. i am soo lucky.

[thecon12]

Thanks for your wonderful comment, you're feedback is always so kind :) I'm glad you liked their heated night together, I really wanted to see what would happen if sex happened before any of their realisations, like on the show.

I'm glad you could see how Erica was hurting and was confused in her reaction. Both of their reactions are quite important to how the other parts to this fic continue :)

[cam_23]

Nice. =]] good job with the sex scene. Now cue the drama and freakout.

[mickaela82]

I love it when clothes become "offending items'. You have a way with words :)

But, but, but...freaking out AGAIN? Whose ass do I have to kick now? Erica's? I'm on it!

[thecon12]

Thanks so much for your comment :D Sometimes clothes really can be insulting lol. Aww don't kick Erica's ass, she's really confused and hurt right now, but I'm sure they'll piece it together eventually.

[mickaela82]

They'd better figure it out, I'm in kick ass mode. I'll definitely go right into your story, lock them in a room together and not let them out until they figure out their...uhm...differences. :p
You're the writer, I trust you :wink

[punky_96]

just f*ck, INDEED

wow. what a reaction. i am so loving this and off to read part 2...

[nybullmastiff]

OMG what a great chapter/part!! Very hot sex scene - bit of a sad but I suspect realistic morning after though....

[thecon12]

Thank you so much for your comment :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed their drunken night and all of the fallout because of it.