Dare You to Move (Part Three)

[thecon12]

Part One
Part Two
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I open my mouth to respond, of course she’s changed her mind, one minute we’re limited to first base and the next we’re brushing naked skin against naked skin, “We can stop,” I tell her finding my voice, I think I’m going to burst if she tells me that we should, I want her and there’s no stopping it now we’ve

Comments

[bas17]

Writer's block my ass! That was fabulous!! Thanks for sharing.

[thecon12]

Lol thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[docwarnerfan]

loved it.

[thecon12]

Thank you! :)

Blown Away

[hot_4_hahn]

God, you corrected what Grey's screwed up. Here was that chemistry we were missing.

This fic was beyond words. You took us on that roller coaster again of their early romance; but your vision was so much more satisfying.

This last section was definitely sexy and hot. But, more importantly it was emotional. Honestly, the part where Callie froze up, made my eyes moist. The nervousness was so real, as well as the arousal that made it hard for Erica to concentrate on her words. And you beautifully repaired that morning after run in, at the hospital. Sounds like Erica’s learning that playful, flirty thing.

I'm fawning too much, sorry. But, this was the perfect fic to get lost in, after a stress day at the office. Thank you! I hope you're writer's block is thing of the past.

Re: Blown Away

[thecon12]

*saves this comment* Seriously, you give the best feedback ever!

I'm glad you enjoyed the emotional side to this, I really felt that the show never gave that part to us, which is the biggest shame for me; as friends I always thought we'd get to see how gentle they were with each other.

Lol Erica's def working on that whole playful, flirting thing ;)

I adored the fawning! Your comments are for the WIN! I can't thank you enough for all you super nice comments :D

[bexamillion]

this is the way it should have gone (and even though you have writer's block, it is perfection)
i love how you kept making references to THEIR promise that they would "be scared together", when the show couldn't even do that.
HOT as well, deliciously so.
all in all, perfect to a t.

[thecon12]

Aww thank you :) I'm really glad you enjoyed them actually being scared together :)

[major_roon]

*sigh* I'm so glad you're back...for a little while at least :)

Your stories always just flow so effortlessly, that's amazing. I will also never think of second bases the same way again - "Second base!" was the most hilarious line ever. I can't seem to stop imagining Erica saying it...

The closet from hell - just delicious. It's hard imagining Erica freaking out about her clothes but suddenly there's someone she wants to look good for, someone she wants to impress and it's easy to see her being all over the place because of a simple decision. Loved that part.

What I liked especially was that they were taking their time. I always imagined that they were rushing into it and got it over with in a frenzy or something on the show, but your version is so much better (obviously).

Thank you for writing this and posting - I loved it!

[thecon12]

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed Erica's unexpected blurting of "second base" the woman likes her rules lol.

Erica never felt like someone who over thought clothes and makeup too much, but I think Callie brought out that inner girlie desire to look as beautiful as possible; she finally had someone worth looking good for.

I agree, there first time always seemed rushed to me too :( Before season 5 started I had this vision of their relationship going in a slow direction, their friendship being the focus, and making every new step they took together so much more special. Shame Shonda doesn't have a clue...

Thank you again for your wonderful feedback!