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"Cellphone Throwdown" (Part 2) (Primeval)

May 01, 2009 02:34

Fandom: ---Primeval---
Characters: Connor Temple, Abby Maitland, Danny Quinn, Nick Cutter, and Scrat
Story: "Adventures of Scrat: Cellphone Throwdown" (Part 2/3)
Rating: K
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Theme music: "Banana Wars" by John Powell from "Horton Hears a Who!"
Author's Note: Seriously this was a random idea as I was making some "Ice Age" icons ( Read more... )

primeval: cellphone throwdown, primeval

Comments 12

telperion_15 May 1 2009, 12:14:57 UTC

LOL, this is great! You have Connor spot on, and Scrat is always awesome! :D

a1cmustangpilot May 1 2009, 12:18:06 UTC

Yeah? Thanks! I was having so much fun writing Connor in this because I've neglected him in the other stories that I have written. I wanted to finally do something that was a bit unorthodox and completely fun. Scrat is a riot. I'm really looking forward to the appearance of Scratte in the third film. :D Thank you for reading by the way!
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fredbassett May 1 2009, 13:03:46 UTC

That was fab! I'm really starting to like Danny, which is a huge surprise to me. I love the way you've just integrated him into the team, in full Denial style!

One tiny Brit-pick .. we call them mobile phones, not cellphones.

a1cmustangpilot May 1 2009, 20:27:33 UTC

Really? I'm glad to hear that! And thank you, I just decided that for my own Primeval timeline, all characters exist, its just a matter of getting them into the story properly. :) And thank you for the tip! I'm editing out the "cellphone" bits but I think for the sake of the title since I designed it specifically for the rhythm I'm going to at least keep that one. :) But thank you though! I should have remembered this! :D
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fredbassett May 1 2009, 20:37:09 UTC

Don't worry, the title worked fine, and I loved the fic :)

a1cmustangpilot May 1 2009, 20:38:47 UTC

All right cool, yeah I just went through all three parts and am about to post the third one now. :) And thank you I'm glad you liked it! I hope you like the final part. :)
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reggietate May 1 2009, 15:57:16 UTC

Hee! This is great fun. Hope part three will be along soon :-)

a1cmustangpilot May 1 2009, 20:25:12 UTC

Oh definitely I was actually working on it just after I posted this. I'm glad I held off though so I could edit a few things in it. :)
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lukadreaming May 1 2009, 19:28:58 UTC

LOL, that was fun, and it was soooo Connor *g*.

a1cmustangpilot May 1 2009, 20:24:34 UTC

:D I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading! I had so much fun writing this. :)
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knitekat May 1 2009, 22:19:27 UTC

Very good Connor here.. but, oh dear.. he's going to be in so much trouble now..

a1cmustangpilot May 1 2009, 22:35:41 UTC

And it's hard to tell who he is going to be in trouble the most with! :D Thank you for reading this and I am glad that you are enjoying this!
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