i'm glad you updated, eli. i like this part... "saw the smeared smile of the organ in the corner, pounding o ut the the death chords of thei r matrinomy. like some organ o f a donor, forcing every one to breathe." and i like that you have the bronx in there, just because. ha ha. even though you tell me your writing is trash, it's really creative and i like it. <3
p.s. i'm looking forward to saturday. i hope you're not late this time, though. ha ha ha. juuust kidding.
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-Don
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you are inspiring.
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i like this part...
"saw the smeared smile of the
organ in the corner, pounding o
ut the the death chords of thei
r matrinomy. like some organ o
f a donor, forcing every one to
breathe."
and i like that you have the bronx in there, just because. ha ha.
even though you tell me your writing is trash,
it's really creative and i like it.
<3
p.s. i'm looking forward to saturday.
i hope you're not late this time, though.
ha ha ha. juuust kidding.
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myvintagehrtachs: shut up
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