For you Project Runwayers out there...

[thebrokenmuse]

After Chris read the rough draft of my paper on humanists in Renaissance Florence:

Leia Devil [11:37 PM]: is the first paragraph is okay?
Soucyman [11:39 PM]: yes
Soucyman [11:39 PM]: I liked it alot
Soucyman [11:39 PM]: the last sentence is wonky
Soucyman [11:39 PM]: read it aloud
Leia Devil [11:39 PM]: ...yeah
Leia Devil [11:40 PM]: i did
Leia Devil [11:40 PM]: it sounds like crap
Leia Devil [11:40 PM]: however, i like your use of the word "wonky"
Soucyman [11:41 PM]: thank you
Soucyman [11:41 PM]: that is why I am a writer
Leia Devil [11:41 PM]: :-)
Leia Devil [11:41 PM]: you're like my tim gunn of writing
Soucyman [11:42 PM]: eeeeeeeee
Leia Devil [11:42 PM]: now you just have to say "make it work" and "carry on"
Leia Devil [11:43 PM]: and occasionally get onto me about my draping skills
Soucyman [11:43 PM]: make it work
Leia Devil [11:44 PM]: nice
Leia Devil [11:44 PM]: you make me feel closer to god