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[Fullmetal Alchemist] Conjured Foundation

Jul 18, 2006 22:05

Title: Conjured Foundation
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: K+
Characters: Edward/Winry
Word Count: 659; Short short

[Written for 31_days; July 18, 2006 - Days of grass and sun]

( Conversation is a rarity, but is of a withheld air )

fullmetal alchemist, short short, 31_days, 2006

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clocklike July 20 2006, 03:35:41 UTC

Eee, thank you. <3 I was unsure of Edward's characterization--I didn't want to make him too sappy, but he had to have some emotions. ^^; Glad to know he's all right!

Yes, Al! I only wrote like a small drabble of him, I should do him more justice. ;_;

I'm happy that you enjoyed! ♥

scorpioyue July 19 2006, 20:13:27 UTC

That was nice and peaceful indeed. <3

clocklike July 20 2006, 03:35:51 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

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clocklike July 20 2006, 05:21:27 UTC

? ^_^;

scarlet_avatar July 20 2006, 14:21:12 UTC

Oh this was so gorgeous and sweet!

It is so rare to find a good, let alone great, Ed/Winry fic (which sucks when they're your OTP) that finding a fic like this is wonderful.

You've really captured Ed and Winry and in this bit especially:

He glowers like a child. “What, you expect me to find a place to leave to every time I get back here?”

She blinks, her eyes as big as round gems.

Ed continues to surprise Winry - i love it.

lena_yume July 22 2006, 05:11:08 UTC

Gah! It was absolutely lovely and so very serene. I feel that you captured not only their personalities and quirks perfectly but also the way they interact with one another. I just loved it and makes me want to read and watch some FMA XD. Good job dear <3.